Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

What a clever and original 5-7-5 this is. It has rather senru-like satire. (Possible typo alert: Didn't you mean to say in your notes that "idealist" is pronounced in 3 syllables, not 2?) Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Yes. I meant 3 as opposed to four ..will remove. Thanks

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Haha, yep, that's what happens. Weren't Alison Redford and Rob Ford reasonably intelligent once? The politics must have done something to their minds. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thanks for the kind review. Ye, supposedly....

Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

Really great 5-7-5 your play on words is brilliant it made me smile! I love the picture also, but it's your last line for me! truly brilliant,
Andrew

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thank you for the review. Glad you liked it.