Comment from pattipac

Excellent

Your lovely haiku about seeing with God's eyes the beauty of His creation is lovely. The rainbow was a fitting exclamation on His finished work.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014

I am thrilled you liked my "shortie" and the point of view I chose. RodG

Comment from winespiller

Excellent

I really like this haiku. This is a very different view than Im used to seeing. With this great picture I could easily see this work being in a book of Haikus.1

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014

Thank you so much for sharing my poem, winespiller. I am delighted you like it so much and must confess the picture inspired the poem. RodG

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

with God's eyes, rainbows
one could see His Creation
the day He rested

The cloud in the bottom right reminds me of a left hand, palm up catching the rainbow sent by God.

Nicely done and good luck in the contest. John

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014

Thank you, John, for sharing my poem and your best wishes.

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

I believe that even those who've never known of the God of the Bible can see Him in the beauty of nature. Your haiku reflects that for me. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you, Karen. I am delighted you liked the poem.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

lovely pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like the celebration of life in this poem about the rainbow's role in the beauty of Creation
Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you, Brooke, for sharing and your kind praise.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a creative rainbow haiku for the writing prompt written in perfect format. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thank you for sharing, Teresa, and for your kind praise and support.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this evocative haiku which has captivated me, I love the artwork, although the rainbow came into being after the flood, not in the genesis creation story! It was a sign that God wouldn't destroy the Earth by flood again! Good entry in this competition, good luck, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, Roy, for sharing my poem and your encouragement.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

With God's eyes, rainbows..................I love rainbows because they are Gods promise to man. They are a visible sign of the promise and His continued relationship with man
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, kiwijenny, for sharing my poem and your blessings.

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Beautiful poem of the rainbows. the picture is perfect for this poem. the Haiku count is right in this instance. Thank you for sharing this nice picture and poem. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

So pleased you liked the poem and the picture. Thank you for sharing, Miss Sally.

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

A beautiful haiku about the creation of the rainbow. Rainbows are one of God's finest works. Your work is beautifully worded and seems to follow the required poetic form.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

I am delighted you like the poem and my wording. Thank you for sharing.