This Love Within
rhyming quatrains 8/6/8/625 total reviews
Comment from grannyfrannie
The rhyming scheme is great
The rhythm fine as well
An easy poem to rate
and lovely story you tell!
This was an enjoyable and easy to read love poem. Can't find anything to critique!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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The rhyming scheme is great
The rhythm fine as well
An easy poem to rate
and lovely story you tell!
This was an enjoyable and easy to read love poem. Can't find anything to critique!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much granny I do appreciate your lovely poem in review of mine. LOL. Happy you liked it. Miss Sally
Comment from Connie Vigil
Ah, a lovely rhyming rhythmic poem on love. Your poem flows evenly and has a full circle ending. Nice job penning this one. Keep on keeping on. Connie
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Ah, a lovely rhyming rhythmic poem on love. Your poem flows evenly and has a full circle ending. Nice job penning this one. Keep on keeping on. Connie
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you so much, Connie for the lovely review. I am so happy you like this. Have a great night. Miss Sally
Comment from donette1914
i love the artwork and so romantic i love where you put I'll be with you through thick and thin until the day I die. simply beautiful
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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i love the artwork and so romantic i love where you put I'll be with you through thick and thin until the day I die. simply beautiful
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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donette, how lovely of you to write such a nice review. Thank you so much. Miss Sally
Comment from JavaJunkie
What a beautiful poem about love. I like how pure your message of love is and how this could be written for anyone of your loved ones. Your rhymes are lovely and the poem has a nice flow.
Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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What a beautiful poem about love. I like how pure your message of love is and how this could be written for anyone of your loved ones. Your rhymes are lovely and the poem has a nice flow.
Nicely done.
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Java Lovely review. Thanks so much. I am so happy you like the rhyming poems. I love writing them. Miss Sally
Comment from WLHall
This is a lovely and heart-felt poem. It flows well using the quatrain of 8/6/8/6. Beautifully executed with its rhyming scheme also. I especially liked the last stanza, not only because of the perfect flow, but the word just struck me down in my heart. So wonderful-loved it!
Wanda
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This is a lovely and heart-felt poem. It flows well using the quatrain of 8/6/8/6. Beautifully executed with its rhyming scheme also. I especially liked the last stanza, not only because of the perfect flow, but the word just struck me down in my heart. So wonderful-loved it!
Wanda
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Wanda, thank you so much for the lovely review of this poem. I am so happy you like it. Hope you have a lovely Easter. Miss Sally
