This Love Within
rhyming quatrains 8/6/8/625 total reviews
Comment from royowen
A nicely penned love poem that is an easy to read work that leaves the reader with a lovely languid feeling! The descriptive narrative is nice, and it is fluidly easy, the abab rhyme scheme is sound, and the meter is even! Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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A nicely penned love poem that is an easy to read work that leaves the reader with a lovely languid feeling! The descriptive narrative is nice, and it is fluidly easy, the abab rhyme scheme is sound, and the meter is even! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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thank you roy for the nice review. I am happy you liked my poem. Have a great day. Miss Sally
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This poem would inspire confidence in any young man. It is truly romantic and well written. I found it enjoyable and with well executed meter and rhyme. Giddy
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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This poem would inspire confidence in any young man. It is truly romantic and well written. I found it enjoyable and with well executed meter and rhyme. Giddy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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HI giddy, so nice of you to drop in and read my poetry. I appreciate the nice review. So glad you liked it. Miss Sally
Comment from Just Pete
A well written ans sensitive love poem. Like a wedding vow, it encompassesthe meanings of true love, be it for a partner or a child. Such beautiful sentiments, there is a gentleness to the words and phraases. A great piece of writing. Peter
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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A well written ans sensitive love poem. Like a wedding vow, it encompassesthe meanings of true love, be it for a partner or a child. Such beautiful sentiments, there is a gentleness to the words and phraases. A great piece of writing. Peter
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Aw, thanks so much Peter, for the very nice review. I do appreciate your nice words and encouragement. Miss Sally
Comment from Nosha17
Lovely poem about the love you feel for someone. You have made excellent choice of words and rhymes to convey your powerful message; Most enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Lovely poem about the love you feel for someone. You have made excellent choice of words and rhymes to convey your powerful message; Most enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Faye, thank you so much for your very nice review. I am glad you liked my poem. It was a pleasure to write. Miss Sally
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I so enjoyed this one and the wonderful message of a faithful love.
Especially: And as the years go by, I'll be with you through thick and thin, until the day I die.
That has so much meaning to me, in the wake of my father-in-laws death. He and Mom have been married almost 70 years. Well done, Carolyn
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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I so enjoyed this one and the wonderful message of a faithful love.
Especially: And as the years go by, I'll be with you through thick and thin, until the day I die.
That has so much meaning to me, in the wake of my father-in-laws death. He and Mom have been married almost 70 years. Well done, Carolyn
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Aw, thanks Carolyn for this very lovely review. Thanks for the 6 star rating. It mens a great deal to me and I am so happy you like it. Wow, 70 years is a milestone. That is wonderful. Not many of the young are going to make it these days. God bless you, my friend and prayers for you in your loss. Love, Miss Sally
Comment from Karen B.
What a beautiful tribute to lifelong commitment and love. It is heartfelt and well written with perfect rhythm and rhyme, making it a joy to read.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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What a beautiful tribute to lifelong commitment and love. It is heartfelt and well written with perfect rhythm and rhyme, making it a joy to read.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Karen B. for the nice review. I am so happy you dropped in to read it and glad you liked it. Miss Sally
Comment from evilynne
Love is indeed everlasting. Your work is well written and flows nicely from beginning to end. It was quite enjoyable to read and its message is quite clear.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Love is indeed everlasting. Your work is well written and flows nicely from beginning to end. It was quite enjoyable to read and its message is quite clear.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much evilynne. I sure do like your nice review. I am so happy you like my poem. It was a pleasure to write. Miss Sally
Comment from Dean Kuch
This was a beautifully penned, poetic proclamation of perfect passion, love and commitment, Charlotte. Of course, the rhyming is superb, the message it conveys is heartfelt and genuine. However, it is that last stanza that sums it all up so beautifully:
"There'll always be this love within
And as the years go by
I'll be with you through thick and thin
Until the day I die."
Magnificent ode to love, and everything that it stands for...
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This was a beautifully penned, poetic proclamation of perfect passion, love and commitment, Charlotte. Of course, the rhyming is superb, the message it conveys is heartfelt and genuine. However, it is that last stanza that sums it all up so beautifully:
And as the years go by
I'll be with you through thick and thin
Until the day I die."
Magnificent ode to love, and everything that it stands for...
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Dean for the lovely review. I am so happy you like this poem. Love your picture, too. Miss Sally (nickname)
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You're very welcome, Miss Sally. It was my pleasure. 8>}
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed your well constructed verse and the lack of punctuation was a good choice as it frees up the reader of the poem. Don
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I enjoyed your well constructed verse and the lack of punctuation was a good choice as it frees up the reader of the poem. Don
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you so much for the nice review. Glad you enjoyed it. Miss Sally
Comment from thequeencatalyst
This is the sort of poem that always puts me in a good mood :) It just makes me feel so very warm and fuzzy inside. Clearly, you're a talented woman, Angelface! I love this piece and can't spot one thing to be improved upon. Congratulations! :) Thank you for sharing :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This is the sort of poem that always puts me in a good mood :) It just makes me feel so very warm and fuzzy inside. Clearly, you're a talented woman, Angelface! I love this piece and can't spot one thing to be improved upon. Congratulations! :) Thank you for sharing :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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My dear Jasmine, thank you so much for this very lovely review. I am so happy you like it. Drop in again. You're welcome anytime. Miss Sally
