Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Very good love poem here, your word flow is good and rhyming is good also. You beautifully tell them how you will always be faithful and kind and loving, to that special someone.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

I thank you again, George for the nice review. Miss Sally

Comment from mrsmajor

Exceptional

A beautiful poem you have penned for our enjoyment, your rhymed quatrain verses and picture make for a lovely package...The abab rhyme scheme was done well...no forcing at all...the last verse was my favorite...my dear husband has left us in sleep, but I felt the same way when he was with me...
This was a joy to read, thank you so much for sharing

Love & Big Hugs are sent to you my friend!

Victoria

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you so much, Victoria, for this lovely review. And I do feel the same way, as my husband is gone too. I miss him and it helps to write such poetry. Miss Sally

reply by mrsmajor on 19-Apr-2014

You're very welcome, true love never ceases, just stays in place...
Take Care Miss Sally!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid use of abab rhyming
good alliteration in heart hums/ fears free
thick/thin
a sincere expression of love in good poetic form
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thank you Brooke for this very nice review. Miss Sally

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a beautifully well written love poem. Simple and sincere, from the very heart. Your quatrains lines make complete sense, nothing forced.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thank you amada for this nice review. I am so happy you like it. Miss Sally

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is so lovely. You convey the true meaning of love in this one. Marvelous rhyme and perfect rhythm too. I wish I had a 6 to give you for this gem. I enjoyed it immensely.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thanks Sasha for this lovely review. I do so appreciate it. I am so happy you like it. Miss Sally

Comment from Terrie DeGolier

Excellent

First of all I just love the picture, it really compliments your poem. This is the type of relationship we all would like to have. Happy Easter to you and your family. Terrie

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thanks Terrie I appreciate your very lovely review. Happy Easter to you, also. XX Miss Sally

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

I must say this is the best poem you have written so far.
I love the promise of it. It is an Anniversary card my dear.
I have to award it my last six. Love the 8/6/8/6 rhyme and the meter is just perfect. Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Aw, thank you Nancy. It has been sitting in one of my writing tablets for a couple of weeks and I just realized I hadn't posted it. Thank you so much for the 6 star rating and the lovely review. XX Sally

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

There'll always be this love within
And as the years go by
I'll be with you through thick and thin
Until the day I die.

What a beautiful love poem, to give undying love to your significant other in this form of poetry is magic.

Well done. Mary

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thank you Mary for the lovely review. I had a great deal of pleasure writing it and was pleased with the way it turned out. LOL. Miss Sally

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

There'll always be this love within
And as the years go by
I'll be with you through thick and thin
Until the day I die.

A very loving and caring poem. This would have been a a great one for the Love poem contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thanks Debbie for this nice review. If I had not already entered this contest, this would have been the one I would have used. Miss Sally

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Angelface2...

~ Very nice declaration of love and loyalty... The pix is really quite good as well... Ties in nicely...

Keep Smilin'.... Jax

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

thanks so much Jax for dropping in and reading my poem. I am so happy you liked it. Have a great day and a Happy Easter. Miss Sally