Picture Poems
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Comment from judester
I love the idea of the birds being provided for during the winter months. I have never heard of this style, pantoum and will research, thanks for sharing Judester
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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I love the idea of the birds being provided for during the winter months. I have never heard of this style, pantoum and will research, thanks for sharing Judester
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you Judester.
Comment from donette1914
what a beautiful bush berries and this was just outstanding in every way I like the ending Amazing resilience resides well penned job well done
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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what a beautiful bush berries and this was just outstanding in every way I like the ending Amazing resilience resides well penned job well done
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you donette
Comment from sunnilicious
Winter berries, that's so nice. Glad there's food for the birds that didn't fly South. Great poem. Good poetic form. Nice repeat lines. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Lovely work.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Winter berries, that's so nice. Glad there's food for the birds that didn't fly South. Great poem. Good poetic form. Nice repeat lines. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Lovely work.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you Alicia.
Comment from tfawcus
A wonderful sight, skilfully turned to a pantoum by you, Tom! They take a bit of juggling to get right! The missing word for scansion jarred a bit (plenty food for them) but otherwise pretty well perfect, I think.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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A wonderful sight, skilfully turned to a pantoum by you, Tom! They take a bit of juggling to get right! The missing word for scansion jarred a bit (plenty food for them) but otherwise pretty well perfect, I think.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you, tfawcus.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
It is indeed a wonder to see a berry bush surrounded by snow in the winter.
You did a very interesting poem with very good usage of descriptive wording to bring out the meaning of your poem.
I enjoyed reading it very much.
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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It is indeed a wonder to see a berry bush surrounded by snow in the winter.
You did a very interesting poem with very good usage of descriptive wording to bring out the meaning of your poem.
I enjoyed reading it very much.
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you Sam.
Comment from risktaker
God provides for all of His creations. Nothing is impossible with Him. Berries growing in the cold snow to take care of birds. Fantastic and amazing. Very few plants that I know of grow in ice cold weather. I great poem, A gorgeous picture and a great testament to the power of God. thanks. I love the structure and the flow.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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God provides for all of His creations. Nothing is impossible with Him. Berries growing in the cold snow to take care of birds. Fantastic and amazing. Very few plants that I know of grow in ice cold weather. I great poem, A gorgeous picture and a great testament to the power of God. thanks. I love the structure and the flow.
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you risktaker.
Comment from grannyfrannie
Simply amazing. First of all a lovely poem with uplifting thoughts . . .the rhyme scheme right on. Not to mention the difficulty in repeating lines in different stanzas. Really great. Very enjoyable to read and job well done!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Simply amazing. First of all a lovely poem with uplifting thoughts . . .the rhyme scheme right on. Not to mention the difficulty in repeating lines in different stanzas. Really great. Very enjoyable to read and job well done!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you very much grannyfrannie. I appreciate the review and comments. The stars are icing on the cake.
