Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi,

This is a beautiful poem. You did a great job in writing it. I sure enjoyed the read and look forward to reading more of your work.

Kat

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you Kat:)

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with through/the...clouds/create...loving/Lord. Good clear message that holds my attention from start to finish.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

thanks Riter:)

Comment from Pegcook

Excellent

Both the photo and poem encourage the reader to reflect on the mysteries that fill our lives. The text of your poem makes it flow. The rhythm assigned to the syllables of the words make for smooth reading, whether read silently or aloud

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

thank you Peg:)

Comment from Munkysam

Excellent

What an awe inspiring description of the image. It portrays such a sense of wonder. It's really cool seeing things like that happen. I like your line breaks and the flow of this poem. Good word choice as well. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thanks so much:)

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I liked the imagery of your poem, the light of the Lord is in the centre of our universe like the sun. You have made good choice of words to convey your message and it was a smooth read. Lovely pic, too. Faye

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you Faye:)

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Teresa this is a truly lovely free verse - the clouds create an eye - good use of metaphor. And you know in your picture it really does look like an eye. As they say... There are more things in Heaven and Earth ... A good read. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

It just looked like God was watching over everything as we know He does:) Thanks for the great review.

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hello Teresa. What a beauty of a poem. I like the imagery you created. I never would have come up with that:-) I like the idea of that eye, an eye of compassion, for me. It was exactly what I needed at the end of a long day.
padumachitta

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you padumachitta:) Get some good rest tonight.

Comment from Andrewajgblue

Excellent

This is a really poetic verse, that goes well with the picture ,it had good rhythm and there was some nice internal rhyme, I really liked it,
Andrew

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thanks Andrew:)

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Teresa - your spiritual post shares your deeper faith and guides you through your storms and your joys. Sharing that deeper knowing in great lines that hold my attention and have me pondering.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thanks Maureen:)