Eye of the Lord
free verse29 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Jesus promises us that he will watch over us. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very inspiring read.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Jesus promises us that he will watch over us. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very inspiring read.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you and Happy Easter:)
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You're welcome, Teresa. Charlie
Comment from Sueellen11
Awesome picture of what I see as the eye of GOD too,, excellent description in poetry form,, well done,,,,I enjoyed,,blessings to you,,,sueellen
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Awesome picture of what I see as the eye of GOD too,, excellent description in poetry form,, well done,,,,I enjoyed,,blessings to you,,,sueellen
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you sueellen for the wonderful review:)
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Thank you sueellen for the wonderful review:)
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Thank you sueellen for the wonderful review:)
Comment from mfowler
I wonder if the poem was inspired by the photo, or was it written and then matched to the image. I'm sure this idea of faith would be a good one to write about anyway, but this is the perfect match. We are all looking for certainty in our lives, some seeking via spiritual means, others hoping for it in earthly pursuits. The latter includes human affection and material gain. But, the one that can only sustain certainty for eternity is in God. The metaphor of the eye of God which you so beautifully explore here, is one of a caring father whow atches over us each day. Now, that's a sense of certainty.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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I wonder if the poem was inspired by the photo, or was it written and then matched to the image. I'm sure this idea of faith would be a good one to write about anyway, but this is the perfect match. We are all looking for certainty in our lives, some seeking via spiritual means, others hoping for it in earthly pursuits. The latter includes human affection and material gain. But, the one that can only sustain certainty for eternity is in God. The metaphor of the eye of God which you so beautifully explore here, is one of a caring father whow atches over us each day. Now, that's a sense of certainty.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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The poem was inspired by what I saw in the sky. I didn't have my camera so this photo was as close as I could get. Thank you for the encouraging words in your review:)
Comment from Irish Rain
Wow! What an awesome sight! The eye of the Lord, very appropriate title, beautifully written, I always feel watched over, taken care of...loved this! Happy Easter to you!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Wow! What an awesome sight! The eye of the Lord, very appropriate title, beautifully written, I always feel watched over, taken care of...loved this! Happy Easter to you!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you and Happy Easter to you as well:)
Comment from jgirlie152
That must have been some sight seeing the clouds broken with the light shining through. You have named it well: The Eye of the Lord. I do believe that is true and you were blessed to have observed this wonderful phenomenon.
Happy Easter, Joan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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That must have been some sight seeing the clouds broken with the light shining through. You have named it well: The Eye of the Lord. I do believe that is true and you were blessed to have observed this wonderful phenomenon.
Happy Easter, Joan
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you and Happy Easter to you as well:)
Comment from Angel Debbie
Don't be sad you did a great job at matching the picture with the words. Alot better then some. LOL No alot better! The write is short and sweet just a treat from all the long ones I've read. Thank You for sharing this wonderful write!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Don't be sad you did a great job at matching the picture with the words. Alot better then some. LOL No alot better! The write is short and sweet just a treat from all the long ones I've read. Thank You for sharing this wonderful write!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much. Yes, I prefer reading and writing short and sweet:)
Comment from Zue65
The picture is magical that really looks the eye in the sky and only the Lord's magical hands can do that. Your poem is an affirmation of that, captured in the beautiful lines of this poem. thanks for sharing and God bless.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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The picture is magical that really looks the eye in the sky and only the Lord's magical hands can do that. Your poem is an affirmation of that, captured in the beautiful lines of this poem. thanks for sharing and God bless.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review:)
Comment from ArtGal
You chose a great picture to go with your wonderful words. We know that He looks over heaven and earth, and you can actually make this out to be an eye, how very creative! I really enjoyed reading this. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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You chose a great picture to go with your wonderful words. We know that He looks over heaven and earth, and you can actually make this out to be an eye, how very creative! I really enjoyed reading this. . .Sharon
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you Sharon:)
Comment from krys123
Teresa, I found out that your poem is a very powerful inspirational and stimulating piece of poetry that definitely shows your inventiveness and creativeness. Your picture complement your palm in this respect: "The light shining through the center of the accumulated clouds creates and eye".
Such resourceful inner rhythmci flow to your piece. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for others and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Teresa, I found out that your poem is a very powerful inspirational and stimulating piece of poetry that definitely shows your inventiveness and creativeness. Your picture complement your palm in this respect: "The light shining through the center of the accumulated clouds creates and eye".
Such resourceful inner rhythmci flow to your piece. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for others and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks Alex:)
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Teresa you are so welcome
Comment from Darkhorse555
what a very beautifully drawn vision in words light shining through the center of the accumulating clouds excellent piece of writing
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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what a very beautifully drawn vision in words light shining through the center of the accumulating clouds excellent piece of writing
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks:)
