The Wind
Understanding the good and bad of an influence27 total reviews
Comment from heyjude
Delahay, I enjoyed this poem and thinking about the wind and how it
can motivate us and help us. This makes me think of people who are
in our lives and encourage us. They are with us, but too soon they
are gone from life on this earth.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
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Delahay, I enjoyed this poem and thinking about the wind and how it
can motivate us and help us. This makes me think of people who are
in our lives and encourage us. They are with us, but too soon they
are gone from life on this earth.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
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heyjude,
I agree. Thank you for your review and deeply thought out comments.
DeLaHay
Comment from rockinm76233
I enjoyed the poem about the wind. It can bring comfort or fear depending on the strength but I like to hear it howl around corners and feel it touch my face when gentle. Good read.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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I enjoyed the poem about the wind. It can bring comfort or fear depending on the strength but I like to hear it howl around corners and feel it touch my face when gentle. Good read.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your review and your comments.
DeLaHay
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your welcome
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lovely poem with a nice ring to it. What you say is very true. Very often we don't notice things till they are gone.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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This is a lovely poem with a nice ring to it. What you say is very true. Very often we don't notice things till they are gone.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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Maria Jose,
What a beautiful name. I wish my key board would make the accent
mark. Thank you for your review and your comments.
DeLaHay
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your poem, nice imagery. I like the way you used the image of the wind especially. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the competition and have a great day
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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I enjoyed your poem, nice imagery. I like the way you used the image of the wind especially. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the competition and have a great day
Comment Written 02-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your review and your comments,
DeLaHay
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This is a great entry, and had a very smooth flow to it. The only suggestion I'd make is the line where you say "Until I had to do it on my own" - this seems to jangle the flow a bit. My suggestion is "Until I did it on my own". To me, that keeps the flow and gist of what you're saying, but is only a suggestion!
I wish you luck with what I think is a very worthy entry! Cheers, Chris xoxoxoxoxo
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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This is a great entry, and had a very smooth flow to it. The only suggestion I'd make is the line where you say "Until I had to do it on my own" - this seems to jangle the flow a bit. My suggestion is "Until I did it on my own". To me, that keeps the flow and gist of what you're saying, but is only a suggestion!
I wish you luck with what I think is a very worthy entry! Cheers, Chris xoxoxoxoxo
Comment Written 02-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your review and your comments,
DeLaHay
Comment from c_lucas
Knowledge is helpful when it explains the situation. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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Knowledge is helpful when it explains the situation. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
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C,
Thank you very much for Your review and your Comments.
D.
Comment from robyn corum
D.,
This is a sweet little poem about the wind, but it's message can also be applied to other things - the loves in our lives that we don't appreciate until they're gone, etc. Very clever! Thanks!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2016
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D.,
This is a sweet little poem about the wind, but it's message can also be applied to other things - the loves in our lives that we don't appreciate until they're gone, etc. Very clever! Thanks!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2016
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robyn corum,
Thank you for your review and your comments.
DeLaHay
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Sometimes a cool gust of wind will come and enchant me tousling my hair and my heart. Yes the wind envelops and pushes you with a certain purpose in mind. Your poem conjures up interesting images. Your words are expressive and the arrangement with the artwork is wonderful. Thanks for sharing this moving piece and keep writing more of them.
Wishing you all the best--
Bill~
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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Sometimes a cool gust of wind will come and enchant me tousling my hair and my heart. Yes the wind envelops and pushes you with a certain purpose in mind. Your poem conjures up interesting images. Your words are expressive and the arrangement with the artwork is wonderful. Thanks for sharing this moving piece and keep writing more of them.
Wishing you all the best--
Bill~
Comment Written 30-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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Bill O'Bier,
Thank you for your review and your comments.
DeLaHay
Comment from RoostyNester
Your poem was very insightful with the message that the wind, such as God, will give us a shove in the right directions. Very seldom, do we know what direction is best for us. When he chooses, we will always come through with victory. Well done in style and verse. I liked your poem.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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Your poem was very insightful with the message that the wind, such as God, will give us a shove in the right directions. Very seldom, do we know what direction is best for us. When he chooses, we will always come through with victory. Well done in style and verse. I liked your poem.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016
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RoostyNester,
Thank you for your review and Your comments.
DeLaHay
Comment from bob cullen
The final line tells it all. And it sure applies to me.
Loved it all, the picture, the poetry and the rhyme.
The contest called for uplifting, this poem sure qualifies in that regard
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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The final line tells it all. And it sure applies to me.
Loved it all, the picture, the poetry and the rhyme.
The contest called for uplifting, this poem sure qualifies in that regard
Comment Written 29-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2016
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Bob Cullen,
Thank you very much for your review and your comments.
DeLaHay
