Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. Most pirates can handle just about anything. But an angry can beat any thing. The pirate should have stuck to stealing gold and other things. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you so much!

Comment from healfromwithin

Good

Here lies Long Dong Silver (good title)

A pirate who knew how to plunder
(and )Many girls virtue was rent asunder
Carried away with their treasure chests (ahem) ?(who was carried away?
An angry dad caught him (last line could be about revenge and would be stronger)
( and you know the rest! )

funny and cute - good luck on your contest.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thanks!

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

This is the first epitaph that I have reviewed for this prompt and I think you have a very good and humorous entry, I wish you luck. Don

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you so much!