Lord Give Me Strength
I was almost persuaded...28 total reviews
Comment from Rmocruz
A believable prayer like scenario.
Today's society runs rampant with tales of temptation
in the workplace.
Well written and entertaining.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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A believable prayer like scenario.
Today's society runs rampant with tales of temptation
in the workplace.
Well written and entertaining.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend, I'm glad you liked it. It won the contest. Have a great day. Bill
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You're welcome Bill.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A very good Temptation poem for the contest. A very common situation you have written about and handled it as it should be, Good rhyme in abcb rhyme form. Flows well and faultlessly. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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A very good Temptation poem for the contest. A very common situation you have written about and handled it as it should be, Good rhyme in abcb rhyme form. Flows well and faultlessly. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks Dorothy, as always. I appreciate your nice comments. It won the contest. Have a nice day. Bill
Comment from Lysa Schuler
This was an excellent poem. Rhyme was not forced, and it read very well. Subject was fascinating, and kept my interest entirely. Worthy of a six, but I have none to give. Exceptional work, and god bless.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This was an excellent poem. Rhyme was not forced, and it read very well. Subject was fascinating, and kept my interest entirely. Worthy of a six, but I have none to give. Exceptional work, and god bless.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you Lysa for your great comments, I appreciate it. It won the contest. God bless you and yours. Bill
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You're so very welcome, and thank you for sharing, and congratulations. Many blessings.
Comment from Angel Debbie
I like the way this is written and the truth it shows.
It runs smooth when read.
Great entry for a contest.
Thank You for sharing. Good luck. you will get my vote
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I like the way this is written and the truth it shows.
It runs smooth when read.
Great entry for a contest.
Thank You for sharing. Good luck. you will get my vote
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Angel for your review and support, it won the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend. Bill
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Your welcome. Stop on by give one of my writes a try, who knows you may find one you like. Happy Easter.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. So many men and women give in to temptation. Sex is such a minor part of what makes our world good. Cheat and you could lose everything else. You stand to lose everything else you have worked for. You make yourself a failure. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. So many men and women give in to temptation. Sex is such a minor part of what makes our world good. Cheat and you could lose everything else. You stand to lose everything else you have worked for. You make yourself a failure. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Nellie, I appreciate your nice comments. It won the contest. Take care of yourself my friend. Bill
Comment from Karen B.
I love this, it's truly sometimes the only way to beat temptation, taking it to the Lord and leaving it at His feet. Your poem flows well and has excellent rhyming. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I love this, it's truly sometimes the only way to beat temptation, taking it to the Lord and leaving it at His feet. Your poem flows well and has excellent rhyming. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Karen for your wonderful comments, I appreciate it. It won the contest. Have a great day my friend. Bill
Comment from akulkumol
A beautiful poem of self realisation. Having so many guilty feelings inside the head hoe any one can have temptation as described. I am really puzzled. May God give you the strength to overcome your temptation. Best wishes for the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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A beautiful poem of self realisation. Having so many guilty feelings inside the head hoe any one can have temptation as described. I am really puzzled. May God give you the strength to overcome your temptation. Best wishes for the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend. I think by talking to God, that will strengthen your faith and allow you to do the right thing. God Bless you my friend.
Comment from royowen
A great piece of 'temptation' poetry contest entry! This was well written, the descriptive narrative is beautifully expressive in its delivery! The rhyme is good and fits with the rhythmic meter! Blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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A great piece of 'temptation' poetry contest entry! This was well written, the descriptive narrative is beautifully expressive in its delivery! The rhyme is good and fits with the rhythmic meter! Blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you Roy for your nice comments. Have a great day my friend.
