An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "He arose"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
26 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Carolyn, I love the wording in this one...you told His story in so few words...so very well expressed...He is now here to stay...a wonderful write...very well written...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Carolyn, I love the wording in this one...you told His story in so few words...so very well expressed...He is now here to stay...a wonderful write...very well written...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Luff you too and thanks for this kind review, Carolyn
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you are so welcome ...xxoo
Comment from beautyseeker
loved this! short and simple, beautfiul rhyme of our Lord and how he can not stay in grave! amen! didnt realize its national poetry month! :o i should know that! poetry has saved me these las tmonths as i am healing! i am off line for a while as my ipad is the only tech aparatus comfortable and the little bubble to review doesnt work! so computer time is very limited. hope you are well. keep poems coming!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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loved this! short and simple, beautfiul rhyme of our Lord and how he can not stay in grave! amen! didnt realize its national poetry month! :o i should know that! poetry has saved me these las tmonths as i am healing! i am off line for a while as my ipad is the only tech aparatus comfortable and the little bubble to review doesnt work! so computer time is very limited. hope you are well. keep poems coming!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this awesome review and rating. I look for your work and while I am 'way' behind love all that I read. Hope you get your computer fixed soon. I know you love to write, :-) Carolyn
Comment from AprilShower
I can relate to it, Carolyn. His resurrection gives those who believe much hope. Hope that death will not keep us in the grave, too. Thank you for sharing the message in this poem.
April
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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I can relate to it, Carolyn. His resurrection gives those who believe much hope. Hope that death will not keep us in the grave, too. Thank you for sharing the message in this poem.
April
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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And thank you also April for reading and making such meaningful comments about 'He arose.' :-) Carolyn
Comment from lakeport
He arose, indeed and he went back to heaven, that's a very
inspirational expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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He arose, indeed and he went back to heaven, that's a very
inspirational expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Hugs to you too. I am happy you enjoyed 'He arose.' :-) Carolyn
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your welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Spitfire
What a succinct way to put this. The contrast of life, death, and resurrection. One nit:'Remember me was the message He gave' --the quote ends after me. Hence,
'Remember me' was the message He gave.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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What a succinct way to put this. The contrast of life, death, and resurrection. One nit:'Remember me was the message He gave' --the quote ends after me. Hence,
'Remember me' was the message He gave.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks Shari for this fine review and edit. Glad you liked 'He arose'. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
I enjoyed reading this, Carolyn. It gives a wonderful accounting of Jesus at the last supper and his death and rising. What a lovely poem for Easter. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I enjoyed reading this, Carolyn. It gives a wonderful accounting of Jesus at the last supper and his death and rising. What a lovely poem for Easter. Miss Sally
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks Miss Sally, you are so appreciated for this fine review and the golden cross award. I am happy you enjoyed 'He arose.'
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Dom G Robles
I like this poem. It talks about the resurrection of Jesus.
The message is pretty well understood, straight forward.
The crucifixion of Christ, and he AROSE. Congratulations.
It is Spring, and is timely. Easter.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I like this poem. It talks about the resurrection of Jesus.
The message is pretty well understood, straight forward.
The crucifixion of Christ, and he AROSE. Congratulations.
It is Spring, and is timely. Easter.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your awesome comments, :-) Carolyn
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You are very welcome, Carolyn. Dom
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You are very welcome, Carolyn. Dom
Comment from mbagby23
He rose so that are sins can be washed free. So we may go to God though his son Jesus. So amazing to think of us like that.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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He rose so that are sins can be washed free. So we may go to God though his son Jesus. So amazing to think of us like that.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Awesome comments, thank you so much ;-) Carolyn
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the poem. Easter is coming up. We have to remember his sacrifice. His child died so ours could live. Easter is a time to remember and renew our beliefs. Great work.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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I love the poem. Easter is coming up. We have to remember his sacrifice. His child died so ours could live. Easter is a time to remember and renew our beliefs. Great work.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you nelliesellie for this wonderful review. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from ArtGal
You said everything about our salvation in six short sentences, very well done! By watching Christian TV everyday, I think of this. And reading the Bible, I'll never stop learning even more. I really enjoyed the wording in this. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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You said everything about our salvation in six short sentences, very well done! By watching Christian TV everyday, I think of this. And reading the Bible, I'll never stop learning even more. I really enjoyed the wording in this. . .Sharon
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you Sharon for your insightful comments.
