Miss You
in 15 words write a short poem9 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
This is so sweet. Hope he/she comes back soon.
Hope all's well with your daughter, dear.
Hugs and lots of love,
xxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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This is so sweet. Hope he/she comes back soon.
Hope all's well with your daughter, dear.
Hugs and lots of love,
xxx
Sonali
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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thxs so much for your read and review Sonali.
Tamara and her guy have decided to stay together till he finds out about having to return home to England. He filled out the request for another 2 yrs with his supported apprentice job for motorcycle building and repairing. He and his boss just don't get along so he figured he'd go home but he didn't count on loving Tamara and she loving him. Fingers are crossed that they give him his extension. thxs for asking
lulube
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I will pray, okay dear? Enjoy the dinner with your parents. God bless you. Love you. Be good too. :)xx
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thxs Sonali and ditto for you and your family
lulube
Comment from NicciFaye
I can relate and understand this feeling of missing someone that you're whole day, every waking second and night you do nothing but think of that person. A sad but lovely poem.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I can relate and understand this feeling of missing someone that you're whole day, every waking second and night you do nothing but think of that person. A sad but lovely poem.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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thank you for your wonderful review
Comment from lakeport
Miss you, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed poem, nice in form,good luck at the contest. God bless you. Hugs!lakeport....
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Miss you, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed poem, nice in form,good luck at the contest. God bless you. Hugs!lakeport....
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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thank you for your review
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from zanya
A Short but succinct poem that effectively exudes a profound sense of longing and yearning for a loved one and an interesting piece of Art to accompany
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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A Short but succinct poem that effectively exudes a profound sense of longing and yearning for a loved one and an interesting piece of Art to accompany
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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thank you for reading and for your comments
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the missing of some one dear to you and your thought of them fill your day
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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good luck in the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the missing of some one dear to you and your thought of them fill your day
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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thxs smoothie my fonts all screwed up
lulube
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ok welcome ..SC
Comment from adewpearl
lovely physical presentation of your poem of 15 words
You express emotion with a genuine, sincere tone, which is something most people appreciate :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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lovely physical presentation of your poem of 15 words
You express emotion with a genuine, sincere tone, which is something most people appreciate :-) Brooke
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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thxs Brooke for the encouraging review
sorry about font
lulube
Comment from Jackarrie
some lovely words of love to your significant other who you miss so much.
Miss You
My whole day is filled with thoughts of you
and how I miss you so.
Good luck in the contest, Mary
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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some lovely words of love to your significant other who you miss so much.
Miss You
My whole day is filled with thoughts of you
and how I miss you so.
Good luck in the contest, Mary
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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thxs so much for your review
but I'm not Mary
lulube
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No I know you are not Mary, because I am. Iknow I should put a full stop after Well done. Mary
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lol too funny
got you now though Mary.
lulube
Comment from Darkhorse555
so touching heartfelt these words My whole day is filled with thoughts of you so very beautifully penned dear friend brought tears to my eyes
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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so touching heartfelt these words My whole day is filled with thoughts of you so very beautifully penned dear friend brought tears to my eyes
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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ahhhhh no tears but appreciate you reading and for your review
lulube
Comment from c_lucas
You spoke a volume in just a few words. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Wishing you the best of luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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You spoke a volume in just a few words. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Wishing you the best of luck in your contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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thank you for reading and for your great comments
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You're welcome.
