~ 'ANYWAY,' - I'LL CARRY ON ~
A silly carry on.26 total reviews
Comment from JBCaine
Author X-
If your aim was silliness, perhaps I should give you six stars.
Since you have so stated that this should not be deciphered, and is all a joke throughout, I'll not bother trying to keep track of the entire story.
I found it quirky enough to keep me reading to the end, in spite of the several distractions which appear to have been strewn about quite purposefully.
Should I try to review this piece? No, I believe I'll just carry on.
Unfortunately, this is how my mind works a lot of the time, also.
Good luck to you in your contest.
JBCaine-
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Author X-
If your aim was silliness, perhaps I should give you six stars.
Since you have so stated that this should not be deciphered, and is all a joke throughout, I'll not bother trying to keep track of the entire story.
I found it quirky enough to keep me reading to the end, in spite of the several distractions which appear to have been strewn about quite purposefully.
Should I try to review this piece? No, I believe I'll just carry on.
Unfortunately, this is how my mind works a lot of the time, also.
Good luck to you in your contest.
JBCaine-
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you JBCaine, for the good wishes.
Silliness is the order of the day. The sillier the better. To match the silly rules.
To analize is to miss the point. But you did review me.
We have An-ton of Differing here. lol.
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Comment from Rondeno
The meta-prose, with you stepping outside your narrative, got off to a terrific start. But why introduce such a lame idea as the FGM? Sorry for Differing.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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The meta-prose, with you stepping outside your narrative, got off to a terrific start. But why introduce such a lame idea as the FGM? Sorry for Differing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you Ronando.
I disagree I just call it silly to match the rules.
We have An-ton of Differing here. lol.
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Comment from c_lucas
This has happened many times in the real world. Your post is very well written with a smooth flow of words,making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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This has happened many times in the real world. Your post is very well written with a smooth flow of words,making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you Charlie, for your kind review and good wishes.
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You're welcome.
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. Super carry on, super. The mind is a strange and wonderful thing, the fact that you let yours roam for our pleasure was very nice:-)
I like the ebb and flow....good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Hello. Super carry on, super. The mind is a strange and wonderful thing, the fact that you let yours roam for our pleasure was very nice:-)
I like the ebb and flow....good luck.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you padumachitta, for your kind review and good wishes.
:) ***.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good introduction that raises my curiosity as to where the writer is going with piece. The pace is slowly than the usual fast-paced exciting pieces but in the end this piece makes for a good read as you just want to tell Anton get the card that fell behind the mantelpiece. I like this, good job.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Good introduction that raises my curiosity as to where the writer is going with piece. The pace is slowly than the usual fast-paced exciting pieces but in the end this piece makes for a good read as you just want to tell Anton get the card that fell behind the mantelpiece. I like this, good job.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you RR, for your kind review. I'm pleased that you like it.
:) ***.
Comment from Prezze
Somehow, I did not get the title in context with the write up. However, humor content of the piece is enjoyable, but with a couple of difficult to understand phrases , rather sentences. Keep your content writing spirits high.
Thanks
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Somehow, I did not get the title in context with the write up. However, humor content of the piece is enjoyable, but with a couple of difficult to understand phrases , rather sentences. Keep your content writing spirits high.
Thanks
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from Aiona
LOL! This was just what I needed today! I personally liked the story, and it did almost have a plot. Twisted, turned, I almost couldn't tell what was going on! I particularly liked the ending. Very in keeping with the guidelines of the contest -- a clueless recipient!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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LOL! This was just what I needed today! I personally liked the story, and it did almost have a plot. Twisted, turned, I almost couldn't tell what was going on! I particularly liked the ending. Very in keeping with the guidelines of the contest -- a clueless recipient!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you Aiona, for your understanding review. I'm pleased you liked it. Just a bit of fun. If I made a person smile, then that has made my day.
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Comment from bluedragon776
This was very cute read. It is pretty horrible that Anton will never find out that he is rich. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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This was very cute read. It is pretty horrible that Anton will never find out that he is rich. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you bluedragon776. Yes it's just tooooo bad for Anton. LOL.
:) ***.
Comment from barleygirl
Your premise is interesting (tho not very believable -- an old worn-out literary trick about the letter falling behind something & not seen for years) . . . but with a more original way for that envelope to get hidden or lost, this would be more believable to me. As you know, the rest is nonsense, which you've done well. I pity you if this is how your inner voice sounds! *smile*
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Your premise is interesting (tho not very believable -- an old worn-out literary trick about the letter falling behind something & not seen for years) . . . but with a more original way for that envelope to get hidden or lost, this would be more believable to me. As you know, the rest is nonsense, which you've done well. I pity you if this is how your inner voice sounds! *smile*
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you barleygirl. I've no idea if it is a worn out literary trick. As far as I'm concerned it is brand spanking new literary trick. LOL.
I just wrote in the same 'silly' sense dictated by the rules. There is no pretense at anything believable, just a question of tying up the loose ends.
Do not pity my inner voice, if it were not for that, I couldn't have written this masterpiece. (tongue in cheek type smile)
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~ I am... ~
Comment from Zue65
Ha, ha,ha, the silliness of the plot, the insaneness of the fairy godmother, the powerless wand, the clueless gift-recipient, the story of the moral, well, I really had a good laugh, aha, ha, ha, ha, you got me there. Thanks for sharing, you made my day light and sunny.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Ha, ha,ha, the silliness of the plot, the insaneness of the fairy godmother, the powerless wand, the clueless gift-recipient, the story of the moral, well, I really had a good laugh, aha, ha, ha, ha, you got me there. Thanks for sharing, you made my day light and sunny.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much nassus 1957. Writing this type of humor can be a little risky. So when someone like yourself enjoys it. It makes my day light and sunny too.
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