Reviews from
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "A Kind of Love"
I decided this is a perfect title
3 total reviews
Comment from
Norbanus
A clear, concise exposure of a need for full disclosure
and to choose a currency that fits the need
If the bills are always hidden and the topic is forbidden
We'll just wallow there forever in our greed
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
Thank you so much clever one. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from
rjuselius
tempted by the devil? it reminds me of a song from saw doctors "bless me father for i have sinned, she had big brown eyes and a silky skin."
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
Yes. Thank you rebekka. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from
sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the relationship you ended because of dishonesty. should be tempt me instead of temp me
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
Thank you and for the correction. Blessings dear lady. Barbara
-1- Next Page
The FanStory Store For Writers
Shop unique products for writers. One of a kind products with quotes from famous authors.
Shop here.
Get a mug, sweatshirt or tee customized with your poem! Yes, your poem on a
Mug |
Sweatshirt |
Tee
$24.95
Any poem on a mug! Choose your mug here.