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My Life In A Box

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Comment from Norbanus
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A clear, concise exposure of a need for full disclosure
and to choose a currency that fits the need
If the bills are always hidden and the topic is forbidden
We'll just wallow there forever in our greed

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much clever one. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from rjuselius
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tempted by the devil? it reminds me of a song from saw doctors "bless me father for i have sinned, she had big brown eyes and a silky skin."
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
    Yes. Thank you rebekka. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the relationship you ended because of dishonesty. should be tempt me instead of temp me

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
    Thank you and for the correction. Blessings dear lady. Barbara