Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

nice rhyming scheme throughout in this simple piece that expresses your beliefs and feeling very well

SImple words often produce the most meaning

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you for this kind review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

Yes. this does not need any picture .when you bow down in adoration to a higher power you are filled with contemplation .let's hope we all go to heaven and then be resurrected !

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Hi there and thank you for reading and reviewing this one, I am glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Nice structure used in this poem Carolyn. Indeed, you are right, it needs to artwork, your words say it all. I like how you start and end your poem with the same stanza.

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

Thank you Sarah,

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, this is creative, succinct with a strong spiritual message for the reader. It recounts the basic tenets of the Christian faith in no uncertain terms. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

I am glad you enjoyed this one GracieAnn, Carolyn

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello notesandmore, Softly penned and a timely piece of spiritual poetry. Of special note:

Life's a
wondrous
Celebration

(Indeed, it is.)

Very good. Keep the blue waters flowing ~ just 16 more to go! LateBloomer

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

I so appreciate your wonderful review and encouragement. :-)Carolyn

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Oh Carolyn, this needs no picture...it so speaks for itself...they wonderful belief you have in God...I so love every word...so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

You are so supportive, I appreciate you and that enjoyed 'I believe'. xxoo back to you, :-) Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 18-Apr-2014

You are so welcome Carolyn...xxoo

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

No, no picture needed, because this poem is full of anticipation and adoration for the Lord. It reflects your deep faith and your love of God and reason for believing, Giddy

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Hi Giddy, Thank you for this wonderful review, I do love the Lord. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Hello Carolyn,

How effective is this! I love the succinct, clipped lines. A powerful Holy Week message.

Happy Easter, my dear - Christ is risen indeed!

Love,

xxx

Sonali :)



of God(')s
Creation

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you Sonali for the wonderful review and edit, I am so far behind but I shall fix that. Have a Happy Easter,:-) Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Exceptional

Carolyn, this is an exceptional poem. Some much expressed in only a few words. A very powerful message, especially during this Holy Week. Just the kind of poem that makes you feel good all over.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014

Thank you so much, for everything you do for me by your support and encouragement. :-)Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

I love your poem. Just think, one day we'll meet in heaven even though we've never met in person here.

Kat

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

'Family' reunions are the best. Sisters at heart. If you have time, go to my portfolio and read a poem 'Sister of my Heart.' Written about a fanstorian I have never met. We correspond. She lives in Oregon and does not write presently. I love her dearly. And you also my friend. :-) Carolyn