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Sun's Sweet Hope

Naani poem

5 total reviews 
Comment from Smoothiecool
Excellent
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good luck in the contest

yes even the smallest ray of hope can turn ones thought s to positive
a simple smile can turn ones day
well chosen words for a short write

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much ~ Cally :)
reply by Smoothiecool on 19-Apr-2014
    most welcome..SC
Comment from rouskin
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Perfect artwork and wise words You are my favorite and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Hi Rouskin,
    thank you so much for your encouraging review :)))
    ~ Cally
Comment from amna jaziri
Good
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It could easily be a post card:instigative and soothing at once.A beautiful expression of hope.Nothing inspires strength and resolve like nature.i should know.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thank you. And yes, you are right :)))
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent
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An inspirational and thoughtful write. Sunlight breaks through the darkest part of the forest, just as hope breaks through the to comfort us at the darkest times. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thank you very much :)
Comment from emrpoems
Excellent
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even the smallest ray
may pierce thickest cloud
and penetrate deepest forest
to soothe the saddest soul
perfect naani form written in four lines and twenty five syllables
Excellent use of alliteration in title--"Sun's Sweet,
soothe the saddest soul.
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for your encouraging review :)