Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. He makes me smile even if he can not. I am sure the puppet can wiggle in one spot. This guy is so ugly he is cute. It sad that puppets are going out of style. Great work.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks it was fun but soooo sad!

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest
your few words show a simple message
how one wishes to smile
but can only frown
and with running & jumping will just fall over
image portrayed well
free flow

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks for the kind review

reply by Smoothiecool on 15-Apr-2014

most welcome..SC

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Puppets are a reflection of who we are, and of course the one controlling it. The sad clown trying to make us laugh. Such a universe view and thought. Thanks for sharing. Les

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thanks, just prattling away

Comment from barleygirl

Excellent

Good job personifying a puppet. The title is especially attention grabbing. The rhyme is an added bonus in such a short poem. Simple observations, but the way you've put it together, very original. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thanks i think I'll prattle on

reply by barleygirl on 13-Apr-2014

*smile*