Regrets
Good love gone bad3 total reviews
Comment from Domino 2
Very dramatically sad and romantic wording, Jandeck.
Excellent metaphor of the 'petals bleeding' in their redness and sadness. 'Thorny' is an excellent touch too.
Best wishes, Ted
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Very dramatically sad and romantic wording, Jandeck.
Excellent metaphor of the 'petals bleeding' in their redness and sadness. 'Thorny' is an excellent touch too.
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much,Ted!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to feel and see that love is not always smooth it sometimes has thorns
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to feel and see that love is not always smooth it sometimes has thorns
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much!
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welcome..SC
Comment from Glasstruth
What a beautiful naani. The color red is my favorite. It shows passion. Thorns might be of regrets, but love is never easy. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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What a beautiful naani. The color red is my favorite. It shows passion. Thorns might be of regrets, but love is never easy. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the lovely review!
Comment from DALLAS01
Like the word thorny, it stresses the pain. That is a vivid image of bleeding petals. The choice of art work enhances the poem but the words stand alone.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Like the word thorny, it stresses the pain. That is a vivid image of bleeding petals. The choice of art work enhances the poem but the words stand alone.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much!
