Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. She questions his level of commitment and finds it true. Is she right or wrong? Only time will tell. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thank you for reviewing.

Comment from Pegcook

Excellent

The sentiment in this 5-7-5 is aptly expressed. All syllables are present and accounted for. The combining of hearing commitment through streaming emotion is novel.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Her definition, indeed that's a very lovel expressed 5/7/5 poem,thank for sharing it,good luck at the contest,God bless you, Hugs!Lakeport.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thank you for reviewing.

reply by lakeport on 13-Apr-2014

your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Gorgeous presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 form
expressive and evocative - a poem to ponder :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014

Thanks, Brooke. Appreciate the review. I loved the art work.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Very nice message in this poem. It is written in the perfect 5-7-5 form for the contest. Good luck to you in the contest:)
~teresa~

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

streaming emotion Good use of 'streaming'
Through his LOVE this bit...'vessel of passion'
he sighs commitment Great conclusion

Well presented.

Regards:

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014

Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked i.

reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 12-Apr-2014

Dear Anon: My pleasure. Do drop by sometime. Thanks.

With Respect: Steve C