An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Double digit Kid"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
25 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
Thank you for introducing Kohlton.(any particular meaning for this name?)You must a very proud grandmother to have grandchildren like him,multitasking,multitalented. A wonderful birthday present for him!.I am yet to be a grandmother!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
  |
Thank you for introducing Kohlton.(any particular meaning for this name?)You must a very proud grandmother to have grandchildren like him,multitasking,multitalented. A wonderful birthday present for him!.I am yet to be a grandmother!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
-
It is a great experience to be a grandparent. One that is hard to explain. Just wonderful. We have four children and each of them have 2, so we have eight grandchildren ranging from twenty-two down to five. We love them all. I am not aware of a particular meaning for Kohl ton's name, however now that you mentioned it, I will research. I want you to know how very much I enjoy your comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from GracieAnn
Carolyn, this is a tender tribute to that special kind of love between grandparents and grandchildren. What a joy they can be. Solid variable rhyme and steady meter. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
|
Carolyn, this is a tender tribute to that special kind of love between grandparents and grandchildren. What a joy they can be. Solid variable rhyme and steady meter. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
-
I am glad you enjoyed this one GracieAnn, Kohlton is a great little boy. I love being his GeGe :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn, an excellent laudation attribute to a wonderful little boy police deserve into all the accolades he achieved in your writing. Your poem which truly awe-inspiring And illuminative and very much showed your creativeness, inventiveness and resourcefulness. None of your rhymes were neither forced, labored or strained in your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may the Lord be with you in yours always.
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
|
Carolyn, an excellent laudation attribute to a wonderful little boy police deserve into all the accolades he achieved in your writing. Your poem which truly awe-inspiring And illuminative and very much showed your creativeness, inventiveness and resourcefulness. None of your rhymes were neither forced, labored or strained in your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may the Lord be with you in yours always.
Alex
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
-
Thank you Alex and a good night to you my friend. (or is it morning where you are?) :-) Carolyn
-
You are so welcome Carolyn
Comment from GE Parson
AWWW "Granny" what a wonderful tribute to your Grandson.
God has privileged us with 15 Grnd.Children and 5 Grt. children, all grown up except for two boys - and what a joy they are. "If we had known what a joy Grandchildren would be We would have had them first." LOL
God bless,
Have a productive weekend,
Your Friend, Jerry
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
 |
AWWW "Granny" what a wonderful tribute to your Grandson.
God has privileged us with 15 Grnd.Children and 5 Grt. children, all grown up except for two boys - and what a joy they are. "If we had known what a joy Grandchildren would be We would have had them first." LOL
God bless,
Have a productive weekend,
Your Friend, Jerry
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
-
Thanks Jerry, what a delightful review this one is. Yes those grandchildren are unexplainable blessings. That golden cross is and honor to review from you. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Jay Squires
Ah-ha! That's where the double-digit comes in! Your poem is so unpretentious, reads easily is so full of love and pride, and if that's the picture of the lad, you are deserving of both -- good looking boy!
Keep your poetry as direct as this. Love it!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
Ah-ha! That's where the double-digit comes in! Your poem is so unpretentious, reads easily is so full of love and pride, and if that's the picture of the lad, you are deserving of both -- good looking boy!
Keep your poetry as direct as this. Love it!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
That's the Double digit Kid himself. LOL He has been and is a wonderful experience in grand-parenting. I love him so much. Thank you for your fantastic comments. :-) Carolyn
-
My pleasure. I love seeing love in a family, especially inasmuch as I'm a Grandfather seven times over, and they are loveable, all!
Comment from Dom G Robles
A personal voice for a son on his 10-year birthday. The poem, as well as the picture, complements each other. The poem is formed nicely. The poem started on the birth of the kid, Kohlton. It expressed the writer's feelings on the birth of the child, and the growing times of the boy to its 10 year of existence. The feelings are well expressed by the writer, the sentiments and the possible expectation of the family for the boy in his future years. The expressions are admirable and reflects the love and care from the point of view of a parent to a growing kid now closer to his teens. Congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
A personal voice for a son on his 10-year birthday. The poem, as well as the picture, complements each other. The poem is formed nicely. The poem started on the birth of the kid, Kohlton. It expressed the writer's feelings on the birth of the child, and the growing times of the boy to its 10 year of existence. The feelings are well expressed by the writer, the sentiments and the possible expectation of the family for the boy in his future years. The expressions are admirable and reflects the love and care from the point of view of a parent to a growing kid now closer to his teens. Congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
Dom, I appreciated your thoughtful summary of Double digit kid. Kohlton is a wonderful little grandson . I was fortunate to be with my daughter in delivery. Such a feeling to be able to hold that new-born first grandson. Thank you so much. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
Aw, Carolyn how sweet. A nice poem for your grandson, who calls you GeGe. My great grandkids call me Gigi. (for great grandma. Grand children are so special. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
Aw, Carolyn how sweet. A nice poem for your grandson, who calls you GeGe. My great grandkids call me Gigi. (for great grandma. Grand children are so special. Miss Sally
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
I appreciate this sweet review. Thanks Miss Sally. :-) Carolyn
Comment from seaglass
A great poem for a beloved grandchild. Ten is a special birthday, to be sure. its a bit of a passage, the pre-teen or tween stage. This is great rhyme and meter.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
A great poem for a beloved grandchild. Ten is a special birthday, to be sure. its a bit of a passage, the pre-teen or tween stage. This is great rhyme and meter.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
The tween stage, I like that, somewhere between, not quite a teen-ager. I enjoyed your comments and thank you for validating the quality of the write. :-) Carolyn
Comment from nancyjam
What a sweet tribute to your 10 year old
grandson. He sounds like a great kid.
Strong rhyme and a smooth rhythm move
the poem along. an enjoyable read.
Happy Birthday to Kohlton!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
What a sweet tribute to your 10 year old
grandson. He sounds like a great kid.
Strong rhyme and a smooth rhythm move
the poem along. an enjoyable read.
Happy Birthday to Kohlton!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
He is a great kid and thank you so very much for your wonderful comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
Oh Carolyn,****** this is so very sweet...I know he will love this poem forever...all the wonderful things you feel for him...so very well written...and a handsome dude...luff Linda xxoo
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Kohlton !!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
|
Oh Carolyn,****** this is so very sweet...I know he will love this poem forever...all the wonderful things you feel for him...so very well written...and a handsome dude...luff Linda xxoo
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Kohlton !!!!!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
-
He is a handsome little dude. He will like that you said that. LOL thanks for this awesome review. :-) Carolyn
-
you are so welcome...I hope he does...Luff
