Poetry From The Heart
Viewing comments for Prologue "Shooting Stars"A book in honor of National poetry writing month.
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Comment from Nosha17
Nice imagery of the starlit sky. I like the references to history and mythology, adds a nice touch. Good choice of words and rhyme and easy flow. Enjoyable read, good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Nice imagery of the starlit sky. I like the references to history and mythology, adds a nice touch. Good choice of words and rhyme and easy flow. Enjoyable read, good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Thank you, Faye, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from DonandVicki
A beautifully written and so very well composed work about the meaning of the shooting stars. The summer month's are an ideal time to watch for them. Don
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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A beautifully written and so very well composed work about the meaning of the shooting stars. The summer month's are an ideal time to watch for them. Don
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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So pleased you enjoyed this poem, Don. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from dmt1967
The last line to my ear seams out of sink the writing was good but the last line threw me it didn't seem to fit the flow of the poem good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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The last line to my ear seams out of sink the writing was good but the last line threw me it didn't seem to fit the flow of the poem good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Thank you for viewing my poem and your comments.
Comment from BeasPeas
A wonderful poem. The title is appropriate to the theme. Well written and rhyming is good, flows well. The last two stanzas are exceptionally nice.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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A wonderful poem. The title is appropriate to the theme. Well written and rhyming is good, flows well. The last two stanzas are exceptionally nice.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Thank you for reading and reviewing "Shooting Stars." I truly appreciate your kind words.
