Savannah Love
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Comment from Twilightspire
Great work on this. I love the dialogue and idiom you chose for Amos and the others. I mentioned it before, but this really sticks out as the crown jewel in this chapter. You flit around with realism in the dialogue and it helps to push the story forward better than an inner monologue would do.
The characters all stand out in their own way, which is good with a cast of this size. You can easily track each one.
You can feel the scene building to the next chapter. A trick that is needed to keep the story flowing flawlessly and you do that wonderfully.
Great job with this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens to Paige and where this will end up.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Great work on this. I love the dialogue and idiom you chose for Amos and the others. I mentioned it before, but this really sticks out as the crown jewel in this chapter. You flit around with realism in the dialogue and it helps to push the story forward better than an inner monologue would do.
The characters all stand out in their own way, which is good with a cast of this size. You can easily track each one.
You can feel the scene building to the next chapter. A trick that is needed to keep the story flowing flawlessly and you do that wonderfully.
Great job with this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens to Paige and where this will end up.
-T.J.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Well. I'ma tellin' ya, dat if them odder(other) readas haven't read them odder(other) bits..why it's a dang shame, that's what.
I like the dilagoue, and the sotry and the chaacters.
It's a pleasure to read along. shur 'nuff is.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Hi. Well. I'ma tellin' ya, dat if them odder(other) readas haven't read them odder(other) bits..why it's a dang shame, that's what.
I like the dilagoue, and the sotry and the chaacters.
It's a pleasure to read along. shur 'nuff is.
padumachitta
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Do I dectect a slight dialect there? Lol. I enjoyed your review. Thank you.
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Your writings continues to hold my attention. I find the dialogue particularly enjoyable. Your story is well penned Barbara,and flows well as it weaves a fascinating tale around a very disturbing chapter of American history.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Your writings continues to hold my attention. I find the dialogue particularly enjoyable. Your story is well penned Barbara,and flows well as it weaves a fascinating tale around a very disturbing chapter of American history.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You're welcome. The South has such a rich history to draw from.
Comment from fairy77
This was very well done and reminded me of Indiana Jones. It's got some suspense an great adventure to it! Really enjoyable one!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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This was very well done and reminded me of Indiana Jones. It's got some suspense an great adventure to it! Really enjoyable one!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
This post had a lot of tension, action and a very nice pace that made you want more and feel soory that the post ended. Great write--Ted
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Dear Barbra,
This post had a lot of tension, action and a very nice pace that made you want more and feel soory that the post ended. Great write--Ted
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Oh my goodness! Why is always Paige getting into trouble? Well, that break the routine. This is a very good chapter, that I have enjoyed Barbara.
Have a nice day!
:)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Oh my goodness! Why is always Paige getting into trouble? Well, that break the routine. This is a very good chapter, that I have enjoyed Barbara.
Have a nice day!
:)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Trouble seems to find Paige. Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from MM lives on :)
wow Barbara, this has been in the works since I can remember...how soon are you to putting into publication...you have developed quite a story line...yes I have been a little lost in the prior chapters but your dialogue is ease to read and keeps reader on edge. well done!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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wow Barbara, this has been in the works since I can remember...how soon are you to putting into publication...you have developed quite a story line...yes I have been a little lost in the prior chapters but your dialogue is ease to read and keeps reader on edge. well done!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. Once it's finished and do some editing it will go to publishing.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A great chapter, my friend. Interesting story about the tunnels. I don't think I have any under my house--although you never know,LOL. Take care-I hear it's really warm down there~Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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A great chapter, my friend. Interesting story about the tunnels. I don't think I have any under my house--although you never know,LOL. Take care-I hear it's really warm down there~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of reading another part chapter of your story. I wish I'd been with you from the beginning. I enjoyable your believable dialog and descriptions as an old Kentucky boy would. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the pleasure of reading another part chapter of your story. I wish I'd been with you from the beginning. I enjoyable your believable dialog and descriptions as an old Kentucky boy would. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Your tie in of Paige's antebellum mansion to the underground railroad is priceless. I'm sure Paige will soon be rescued from the crumbling tunnels is close at hand as the rescuers are guided by Morgan's bark. Does the discovery of the tunnels mean the much anticipated treasure is also nearby?
Love and Irish Hugs for good reading.
Roger
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Hi Barbara:)
Your tie in of Paige's antebellum mansion to the underground railroad is priceless. I'm sure Paige will soon be rescued from the crumbling tunnels is close at hand as the rescuers are guided by Morgan's bark. Does the discovery of the tunnels mean the much anticipated treasure is also nearby?
Love and Irish Hugs for good reading.
Roger
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
