Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 162 "In Underbrush"Photograph Inspired Poems
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Comment from 9999pool
Thick as thieves - A special bond people have for each other. Derived from the idea of "partners in crime". Smiles.
There are only two rhymes and both are done beautifully.
The robin nestled and hidden thick as thieves to rest. Thick green leaves to camouflage its whereabouts as it lay silently to enjoy the coolness of the day.
Great write. Brilliantly penned. Well done.
A Virtual six ******stars write as my sixers are thick as thieves lost inside the green luscious leaves, smiles.
Loved the flow and the ease of reading aloud with its tempo and metaphor. Bravo!!
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thick as thieves - A special bond people have for each other. Derived from the idea of "partners in crime". Smiles.
There are only two rhymes and both are done beautifully.
The robin nestled and hidden thick as thieves to rest. Thick green leaves to camouflage its whereabouts as it lay silently to enjoy the coolness of the day.
Great write. Brilliantly penned. Well done.
A Virtual six ******stars write as my sixers are thick as thieves lost inside the green luscious leaves, smiles.
Loved the flow and the ease of reading aloud with its tempo and metaphor. Bravo!!
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you Ritchie, I appreciate those thick as thieves virtual stars.
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Welcome. Smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment from jadapenn
A very good and descript triolet of this little robing hiding amongst the leaves. It is interesting to watch what the little birds get up to. If you don't keep alert you miss so much of what is happening in nature. Well penned. I enjoyed. luv jada
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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A very good and descript triolet of this little robing hiding amongst the leaves. It is interesting to watch what the little birds get up to. If you don't keep alert you miss so much of what is happening in nature. Well penned. I enjoyed. luv jada
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thank you so much Jada.
Comment from playinaround
I love the wording and the rhythm of this poem. A pleasure to read. Outstanding writing and presentation! Thank you for sharing this lovely triolet!!
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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I love the wording and the rhythm of this poem. A pleasure to read. Outstanding writing and presentation! Thank you for sharing this lovely triolet!!
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thankyou you Playinaround, for a wonderful review and rating.
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This was really nice, I loved the wording and the last line was really nice, it really captured a moment I felt and gave the overall feeling of a glimpse at nature, great writing,
Andrew
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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This was really nice, I loved the wording and the last line was really nice, it really captured a moment I felt and gave the overall feeling of a glimpse at nature, great writing,
Andrew
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thank you Andrew
Comment from MoIronE13
Great shot with a good eye for the hidden (so they think).
I love to listen for bird calls then try to visualize them.
Trees are such a protective environment for our feathered friends.
Thanks for sharing..
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Great shot with a good eye for the hidden (so they think).
I love to listen for bird calls then try to visualize them.
Trees are such a protective environment for our feathered friends.
Thanks for sharing..
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thank you MolronE. Yes, I was out walking today and heard/saw geese, ducks, seagulls, robins, cardinals, and red-winged blackbirds. The migration back is definitely on.
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what a great feeling..
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"In the Underbrush" is an excellent triolet with good meter, rhyme and a rhyme scheme consistently followed. It has good figurative language and imagery (thick as thieves).
Preston
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
"In the Underbrush" is an excellent triolet with good meter, rhyme and a rhyme scheme consistently followed. It has good figurative language and imagery (thick as thieves).
Preston
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Thank you Preston.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an amazing photo, Tom, you certainly excelled yourself with this one. I enjoy this style of poetry and it really goes well with your photo. He does look cute! xsx sandra
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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What an amazing photo, Tom, you certainly excelled yourself with this one. I enjoy this style of poetry and it really goes well with your photo. He does look cute! xsx sandra
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Thank you Sandra. If you look closely, there's actually two birds in that bush. You just slightly see the belly and part of a wing to the left of the main bird.
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Of course I had to go and look, and yes, I could just see it! You were really lucky to have gotten so close without spooking them. You must have a really good zoom lens on your camera. I always think it is better to go for a really good one and get the shots you want, then make do and miss out. This photo proves it. xxx
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Sometimes the smallest of birds sing the sweetest of songs.
I enjoyed this very well written Triolet poem and the endearing subject choice.
You have done well to capture a photo.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Sometimes the smallest of birds sing the sweetest of songs.
I enjoyed this very well written Triolet poem and the endearing subject choice.
You have done well to capture a photo.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Thank you Shirley. Actually there are two birds in that bush.
Comment from MagKing
A fine write from you Treischel
You did great with the piece.
I had to check for the meaning of a triolet.
And I must say you did a great job here.
Thanks for sharing!
MagKing
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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A fine write from you Treischel
You did great with the piece.
I had to check for the meaning of a triolet.
And I must say you did a great job here.
Thanks for sharing!
MagKing
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Thank you Mag King. They are a simple format, but can produce lovely poems.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom - that is so great - I was just this evening noticing more robins and when they sing, I am mesmerized. A lovely post and one that captures what I have witnessed Robins doing even in my yard. Excellent skilled writing as always.
Loved it :)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Dear Tom - that is so great - I was just this evening noticing more robins and when they sing, I am mesmerized. A lovely post and one that captures what I have witnessed Robins doing even in my yard. Excellent skilled writing as always.
Loved it :)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2014
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Thank you Maureen. Might get 12 inches of snow by morning.
