An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Whimsical and Random"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
22 total reviews
Comment from Suzanne54
This poem had me giggling, I like to hear about how people come to get their names. I thought this was clever the way the writer presented themselves.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
This poem had me giggling, I like to hear about how people come to get their names. I thought this was clever the way the writer presented themselves.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
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Thanks so much for this wonderful review. I am delighted you enjoyed it so much. :-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
OMG, a poem a day!!!! I am reading backwards...LOL...very cute the way you got your site name Carolyn...I love the way you grouped together and came up with it...a great story told...very well written...Luff Lindaxxoo
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
OMG, a poem a day!!!! I am reading backwards...LOL...very cute the way you got your site name Carolyn...I love the way you grouped together and came up with it...a great story told...very well written...Luff Lindaxxoo
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much. :-) Carolyn
Comment from tbacha58
"So, come, let's join together
A muse-team we'll make.
By combining your ideas, and my thoughts,
one Happy Poet we're sure to create."
A very positive poem. I have been away for a while, so I will read it from the beginning. Already I am existed to go on. Very beautiful picture, with amazing phrases. Hugs Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
"So, come, let's join together
A muse-team we'll make.
By combining your ideas, and my thoughts,
one Happy Poet we're sure to create."
A very positive poem. I have been away for a while, so I will read it from the beginning. Already I am existed to go on. Very beautiful picture, with amazing phrases. Hugs Terry xoxo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Hi there and welcome back, I hope you are doing well. Thanks for this wonderful review and generous rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from NicciFaye
Oh my goodness...this absolutely made me SMILE and I am glad I read it. Beautiful, sweet and innocent in thought. What an excellent introduction to your muse. Just loved this!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
Oh my goodness...this absolutely made me SMILE and I am glad I read it. Beautiful, sweet and innocent in thought. What an excellent introduction to your muse. Just loved this!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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I am glad you liked this one, it was fun to write. :-) Carolyn
Comment from GracieAnn
Carolyn, this is such a pithy write that is set in a light conversational tone, but has depth of meaning. We need salty and sweet, hot and cold to round out our meaning. Well done. I'm on board with Debbie, too. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
Carolyn, this is such a pithy write that is set in a light conversational tone, but has depth of meaning. We need salty and sweet, hot and cold to round out our meaning. Well done. I'm on board with Debbie, too. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Cool, then I will be reading and sharing with you. Thanks for this great review. Good luck :-) Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
What a clever challenge and incentive to put a book together. Love the personification and the cartoon. Great use of dialogue to put the two together to explain your name.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
What a clever challenge and incentive to put a book together. Love the personification and the cartoon. Great use of dialogue to put the two together to explain your name.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Shari, join the challenge if you like, see author notes for Debbie's pen name , she is a great poet and a very special individual. :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn, you couldn't of been any more cuter than writing something this creative, inventive and illuminative. I found your rinds to be very whimsical and neither of your rinds were forced, labored or strain in your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem made easy for me to read your poem clearly. Thank you so much for sharing such an enlightening poem and posting it also and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
Carolyn, you couldn't of been any more cuter than writing something this creative, inventive and illuminative. I found your rinds to be very whimsical and neither of your rinds were forced, labored or strain in your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your poem made easy for me to read your poem clearly. Thank you so much for sharing such an enlightening poem and posting it also and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Alex for your wonderful comments. I am delighted you enjoyed this little poem. Now if I can keep it up for 29 more days. :-) Carolyn
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Carolyn, you are so sincerely welcome. I'm sure you can do it easily.
Cheers
Alex
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Carolyn.
what a wonderful poem, full of fun and whimsy. I really like your ending. You've taken on quite a challenge. Good for you. I wish you all the best and look forward to reading the month of April.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
Hi, Carolyn.
what a wonderful poem, full of fun and whimsy. I really like your ending. You've taken on quite a challenge. Good for you. I wish you all the best and look forward to reading the month of April.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Rosalyne, I hope my muse-team holds out that long. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
So cute, Carolyn. I love it. Hmm. One a day for 30 days. I hope you can accomplish that. good luck. I like the picture of the two girls talking. LOL. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
So cute, Carolyn. I love it. Hmm. One a day for 30 days. I hope you can accomplish that. good luck. I like the picture of the two girls talking. LOL. Miss Sally
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Miss Sally, any topics? Should be fun. :-) Carolyn
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How about April showers? I think I am about out myself. LOL. xxx Miss Sally
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How about April showers? I think I am about out myself. LOL. xxx Miss Sally
Comment from ennahanid
That is some challenge but this is a good start that's for sure and I must fan you so I don't miss anymore of your delightful writing. This was a most pleasant read this morning _ Dinah
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
That is some challenge but this is a good start that's for sure and I must fan you so I don't miss anymore of your delightful writing. This was a most pleasant read this morning _ Dinah
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks Diana and welcome aboard. :-) Carolyn