Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

This is a very good chapter to the continuing story as the story plot seems to be coming together. This chapter is short, almost a flash work but is a good one as always. Don and Vicki

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

You always leave your readers with such a hook! OMG, poor Paige is buried under those rocks? I hope not.

Good post - lots of action and tons of tension. Good dialogue as always. Love Uncle Amos!

Av

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Dear Barbra,
Great build-up of the suspense; Amos coming to the house, finding the latch and the shoe in the tunnel. Another well-paced chapter. Great job--Ted

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi. Ok, you best be posting again soon, because I need t know what's going on. This is good. Tunnels are always a good place for bad action, scary things.:-)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

The dog, Morgan, is a wonderful character. A great chapter
altogether.

But what's happened to Paige? Has she found the hideout?
Will she find some treasure? I hope she's safe.

I know dere's an[d] entrance dere. - lose the "d"


Margaret

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Hmm. I love stories with hidden rooms and whatnot. Lovely chapter, Barbara. Can't wait for more. I found a couple of spag.. The lights when out... (went) opening para.
I know dere's and entrance dere. (an) not and. Very good. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Well the scene at the tunnel added tension and excitement in the story of Paige. Now we, the readers are hooked in your story, for we are all curious as to what happened to Paige and her dog Morgan. Again, I will wait for the next post.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

Hi Barbie, grief, did Paige go missing so fast. It was nice to see Amos again. Love their way of talking and Dog is just too precious. This chapter didn't stretch far though. Cash needs to be real worried over Paige. luv jada

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Well now, that's an interesting turn of events. Can it be that Paige has found her way into the ghost's hide out? Maybe she'll find the antibellem treasure, or one of the ghosts.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

You've done an excellent job of building suspense here, Barbara. An excellent post and not a bit of SPAG. Well done. :) nancy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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