Savannah Love
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Comment from judiverse
Definitely a 6! I thought Paige's troubles were over, but apparently not. The Walkers show up and accuse her of murder. She is smart to get in touch with her lawyer after they make threats. You very skillfully clear the house so Paige will be along again--except for Morgan, of course. Then he's disappeared and the power has gone out. More bad stuff seems about to happen. Glad your son is not requiring surgery after all. Good news. judi
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Definitely a 6! I thought Paige's troubles were over, but apparently not. The Walkers show up and accuse her of murder. She is smart to get in touch with her lawyer after they make threats. You very skillfully clear the house so Paige will be along again--except for Morgan, of course. Then he's disappeared and the power has gone out. More bad stuff seems about to happen. Glad your son is not requiring surgery after all. Good news. judi
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
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You're so welcome. Paige has still more trials to endure. judi
Comment from lindalcreel
So glad to hear about your youngest son. Back to the story, I wonder who is there with Paige; maybe it's Bradley, or maybe someone else. Dear God, I hope that guy she killed doesn't come back. Although I doubt Bradly would allow him in the house again. LOL Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope she is alright. I doubt Cash would forgive himself if anything else happened to her.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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So glad to hear about your youngest son. Back to the story, I wonder who is there with Paige; maybe it's Bradley, or maybe someone else. Dear God, I hope that guy she killed doesn't come back. Although I doubt Bradly would allow him in the house again. LOL Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope she is alright. I doubt Cash would forgive himself if anything else happened to her.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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I know Cash would never forgive himself. Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure:)
Comment from mumsyone
You left us with a good page-turner, Barbara, wondering what happened to Morgan!
"It feels like a storms (storm's) brewing."
Cash held the chair while Paige sat,(. He) he asked, "Did everything go all right?"
It should be taken care of in a manner (matter?) of minutes.
While (the) group ate lunch,
Billy Joe left the room, chopping (chomping?)on his tooth pick.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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You left us with a good page-turner, Barbara, wondering what happened to Morgan!
"It feels like a storms (storm's) brewing."
Cash held the chair while Paige sat,(. He) he asked, "Did everything go all right?"
It should be taken care of in a manner (matter?) of minutes.
While (the) group ate lunch,
Billy Joe left the room, chopping (chomping?)on his tooth pick.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Thank you I edited this twice this morning again. And about 4 times yesterday. I don't get it. Thank you.
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Crazy things are happening on here, Barbara. I wrote a reply this morning and it started "jiggling" and disappeared!
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I was posting this post and somehow my previous post was promoted. I don't get it. I know I was on the right post.
Comment from c_lucas
Well written, but I found one knich. The weather is looking bad and Morgan has run, again. Page has chased after him. It looks like you are coming to the end of the story.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Well written, but I found one knich. The weather is looking bad and Morgan has run, again. Page has chased after him. It looks like you are coming to the end of the story.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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I am coming to the end of the story. SADDDDDDDDD, but I hope every likes the ending. Thank you for the kind review.
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Good luck
Comment from adewpearl
Wow, lots of drama and good dialogue that shows that drama in this chapter. I love the way Paige stands up to the bullying Walkers. And now something happened to Morgan, the dog?
You will have me having anxiety attacks all week long :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Wow, lots of drama and good dialogue that shows that drama in this chapter. I love the way Paige stands up to the bullying Walkers. And now something happened to Morgan, the dog?
You will have me having anxiety attacks all week long :-) Brooke
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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I would love to be able to post more often, but to be honest right now, I am struggling to post once a week. Thank you for the kind review.
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That's OK - I'm impatient by nature. LOL
Comment from Ben Colder
Now I am left in the middle of a bad storm and the dog has skipped out. Well the rich don't think their sweet boy was fallible. Hum. Interesting write. Roll on . Shalom.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Now I am left in the middle of a bad storm and the dog has skipped out. Well the rich don't think their sweet boy was fallible. Hum. Interesting write. Roll on . Shalom.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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I am sure you have known rich people who often say, "not my child." I have known plenty. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh yea. Most always.
Comment from Sasha
Oh, the nerve of Mr. and Mrs. Walker. They do live in their own fantasy world, don't they. I felt nervous knowing Paige was home alone and now Morgan is missing. Not a good sign at all. I anxiously wait for the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Oh, the nerve of Mr. and Mrs. Walker. They do live in their own fantasy world, don't they. I felt nervous knowing Paige was home alone and now Morgan is missing. Not a good sign at all. I anxiously wait for the next chapter.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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I know, I am wondering if her friends can find her before something happens. I sure hope so. Thank you for the kind review.
