Savannah Love
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Comment from adewpearl
I'm glad Steven is home. I sure hope he doesn't need surgery.
Excellent dialogue in this chapter and insight observations about relationships and what a woman wants and doesn't want from a man. I think it's touching that Cash is willing to take advice and do whatever it takes. I love that Paige wants to be held in the end. The pizza discussions add just the right balance of levity. Brooke
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I'm glad Steven is home. I sure hope he doesn't need surgery.
Excellent dialogue in this chapter and insight observations about relationships and what a woman wants and doesn't want from a man. I think it's touching that Cash is willing to take advice and do whatever it takes. I love that Paige wants to be held in the end. The pizza discussions add just the right balance of levity. Brooke
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and support. I worry about putting too much homey stuff in my stories, but I want to make it real without going overboard.
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I like the homey touches - people don't just live the drama - the little things are what keep us all human
Comment from judiverse
I love your story of Paige and am glad her problems are coming to an end. Understandably, she is in a state of shock about Walker's death and wondering about her liability. With that family, who knows what they might yet do? Nice bit about the ice cream eaten from the container. Gives Paige a nice, down-home quality. I wonder if that ghost has made his last appearance, or will he have more to reveal? Great work. judi
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I love your story of Paige and am glad her problems are coming to an end. Understandably, she is in a state of shock about Walker's death and wondering about her liability. With that family, who knows what they might yet do? Nice bit about the ice cream eaten from the container. Gives Paige a nice, down-home quality. I wonder if that ghost has made his last appearance, or will he have more to reveal? Great work. judi
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I have a strange feeling Bradley will be a hero in the end, or will he??? Thank you for the kind review.
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You're so welcome. I do hope Paige isn't going to have more problems before the story ends! She's been through it already. judi
Comment from Ben Colder
This story could be made ease into script writing. It captures the plot in to much good dialog. I find no fault. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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This story could be made ease into script writing. It captures the plot in to much good dialog. I find no fault. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Gungalo
A well written chapter I'd say. Poor Paige, she is beside herself. Well Cash will always be by her side. I hope your son is alright girl.
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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A well written chapter I'd say. Poor Paige, she is beside herself. Well Cash will always be by her side. I hope your son is alright girl.
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate the well wishes.
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Smile.
