Savannah Love
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
If ya go up now, ya'll look like a lovesick dog. She's already got one mutt." - OMG, on the floor laughing. Too kewl.
"Will you hold me?" Paige lay on the bed. "I need to be held." - I don't think she really needed to ask him that. But I am so glad that Cash isn't doing the macho thing. He's being super supportive. I can't wait for the real kiss.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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If ya go up now, ya'll look like a lovesick dog. She's already got one mutt." - OMG, on the floor laughing. Too kewl.
"Will you hold me?" Paige lay on the bed. "I need to be held." - I don't think she really needed to ask him that. But I am so glad that Cash isn't doing the macho thing. He's being super supportive. I can't wait for the real kiss.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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It is coming, but I want a particular way I want it done. I'm struggling with it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from angelface2
good job, Barbara. I loved the idea of the ice cream.(mine is Mackinac Island Fudge.) I didn't find any errors. LOL> Loved reading it. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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good job, Barbara. I loved the idea of the ice cream.(mine is Mackinac Island Fudge.) I didn't find any errors. LOL> Loved reading it. Miss Sally
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. I doubt that Paige is finished with the Walkers.
"Yeah." Cash studied the stair case (staircase).
If ya go up now, ya'll look like a love sick (lovesick) dog.
"Cash, you won't look like a love sick (lovesick) dog,
She opened the freezer door,(no comma) and grabbed two containers of ice cream,(no comma) and faced Nala.
Paige glanced at him, then walked over,(no comma) and grabbed the ice cream.
Maybe it (it's) a female thing.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Good chapter, Barbara. I doubt that Paige is finished with the Walkers.
"Yeah." Cash studied the stair case (staircase).
If ya go up now, ya'll look like a love sick (lovesick) dog.
"Cash, you won't look like a love sick (lovesick) dog,
She opened the freezer door,(no comma) and grabbed two containers of ice cream,(no comma) and faced Nala.
Paige glanced at him, then walked over,(no comma) and grabbed the ice cream.
Maybe it (it's) a female thing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I hate making those mistakes. I know better too. DARN!! Thank you for the catch.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb I figured you are getting near to the end of you novel when Paige asked Cash-
"Do you honestly believe this is over?"
Cash's eyes met hers. "I think the Walker family may still cause problems, but for the most part; it's over.
Well let me tell you this Barb I liked each chapter of your novel.
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Hi Barb I figured you are getting near to the end of you novel when Paige asked Cash-
"Do you honestly believe this is over?"
Cash's eyes met hers. "I think the Walker family may still cause problems, but for the most part; it's over.
Well let me tell you this Barb I liked each chapter of your novel.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from emjaihammond
I have some catching up to do. I have always loved the way this story comes together. It has kept its secrets very well and kept readers fully engaged. I'll be catching up in the mean time. Loved reading it.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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I have some catching up to do. I have always loved the way this story comes together. It has kept its secrets very well and kept readers fully engaged. I'll be catching up in the mean time. Loved reading it.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from elgone
The story is winding up it seems. Paige and Cash are going to hav done of this tempestuous relationships where they fight and make up but mostly they'll be fine.
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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The story is winding up it seems. Paige and Cash are going to hav done of this tempestuous relationships where they fight and make up but mostly they'll be fine.
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I think they enjoy bickering. LOL
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
A half gallon of ice cream in one sitting? Mama mia, that is going to be one massive sugar hit, but not a bad way to deal with the shock.
Again a good chapter. I think Cash is rioght though, the Walkers ain't done yet.
Patrick
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Hi Barbara,
A half gallon of ice cream in one sitting? Mama mia, that is going to be one massive sugar hit, but not a bad way to deal with the shock.
Again a good chapter. I think Cash is rioght though, the Walkers ain't done yet.
Patrick
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I happen to have heard it from a good source, we will see them at least once more.
Comment from Angel Blessings
Very well written. Reads smoothly, the chapter kept my attention throughout. Glagolitic Paige is coming around. I would not want her incarcerated. Good job! Angel Blessings
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Very well written. Reads smoothly, the chapter kept my attention throughout. Glagolitic Paige is coming around. I would not want her incarcerated. Good job! Angel Blessings
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Janie King
There's no way Paige could go to jail, that just wouldn't work. There's still the question as to whether there is a treasure and if the ghost is going to make himself known, especially to the guys. Good chapter, Still praying. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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There's no way Paige could go to jail, that just wouldn't work. There's still the question as to whether there is a treasure and if the ghost is going to make himself known, especially to the guys. Good chapter, Still praying. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your prayers. I appreciate your kind review and dropping by.
Comment from c_lucas
You have taught your readers a new way for ice cream to be in demand. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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You have taught your readers a new way for ice cream to be in demand. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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The female reviewers already know about it. Maybe it will teach you men how to help a lady when in stress. LOL. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
