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Savannah Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "CHAPTER EIGHTEEN; PART FIVE"
Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from A Matter Of Words
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Another well-penned chapters. I love the humour in this. As usual, the dialogue was excellent, the story flowed well and the characters realistic.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by A Matter Of Words on 19-Mar-2014
    You are very welcome.
Comment from padumachitta
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Hello. I like the dialogue and the story. I want to know the end. I think it is a shame we have to cut up chapters for FS. I like to read a proper length chapter, but I guess most people don't, at least on this site.
Any way, i'm with you till the end.
May you son be well and you too,
padumachitta

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where cash and paige bond over pizza and ice cream as he holds her while she cries. i am glad steven is doing better. i pray he doesn't need surgery

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Awwww! This was a very sweet and romantic chapter, Barbara, and it was just in time, too - nicely planned. I enjoyed it very much, and I am glad those two are finally relaxing into their feelings for each other! (LOL)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate both.
Comment from Cajungirl
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Paige and Cash lying together in the bed holding each other. Letting that good ice cream melt. LOL

This is an excellent chapter part. The dialog, as usual, is brilliant; very believable. Great job.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    I think I accidentally ate all the ice cream. LOL. Actually I have wondered about that ice cream, but I can't see them running downstairs to put it in the freezer. I wonder if Morgan licked it up. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Cajungirl on 18-Mar-2014
    I think it added a real nice touch to the dialog making it that much more realistic.
Comment from Sankey
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hi friend. Thanks for the update on your son. More good reading here. I am happy to keep gpong as long as it takes. can't remember did they get married yet?

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    NO they aren't married. We'll have to see if they make it to the alter or not. Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from DonandVicki
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I think that this chapter has very good flow as the others and connects the story into one cohesive piece. A good continuation to your romantic fiction novel. Don and Vicki

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
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Hi Barbara:(
"Whoa!" Mary Pat grabbed his arm. "You'll need more than that." She opened the freezer door grabbed two containers of ice cream, and faced Nala. "Which one? I'd say butter pecan."

Butter pecan cs cream, indeed! Paige is becoming more like a southern bell all the time! Obviously, Mary Pat and Nala know that nothing says love in the South like butter pecan cs cream.

Great dialog. Now that most of the excitement is over, it must finally be time for love to take over the story. Again I send love and Irish Hugs to give you strength.

Roger

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
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Well, it's about time. Phew! They're finally acknowledging what they feel for each other - reaching out to each other.

Well done, Barbara. A very enjoyable post.

And I appreciate the update on your son. I'm glad he's doing ok, and I'm certain he'll continue to do so.

Hugs,

Av

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I appreciate your visit.
Comment from Sasha
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Excellent chapter and I just love how you ended it. Page and Cash are truly meant for each other. I do hope your son improves and does not have to have surgery.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and stopping by. I always appreciate4 hearing from you.