Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "CHAPTER EIGHTEEN; PART FIVE"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
54 total reviews
Comment from AprilShower
I'm almost too late to read this chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it, but wanted to read more. I'll have to go read the next chapter right away. It looks like these two will get married soon.
I have no suggestions.
April :o)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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I'm almost too late to read this chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it, but wanted to read more. I'll have to go read the next chapter right away. It looks like these two will get married soon.
I have no suggestions.
April :o)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Norbanus
I wish I could find something to suggest to improve this story, but I can't. I love your ability to show the characters's emotions so succinctly-- as in this line:
"Yeah." Cash studied the staircase.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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I wish I could find something to suggest to improve this story, but I can't. I love your ability to show the characters's emotions so succinctly-- as in this line:
"Yeah." Cash studied the staircase.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from bhogg
Yumm - butter pecan. Maybe a southern thing. I'm on site to learn, and I want you to know that I've paid lots of attention to your work. I love how smoothly your dialog glows from character to character. I struggle. You make it look simple. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Yumm - butter pecan. Maybe a southern thing. I'm on site to learn, and I want you to know that I've paid lots of attention to your work. I love how smoothly your dialog glows from character to character. I struggle. You make it look simple. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from amahra
People who just come into your story not having read some previous chapters (especially the ignorant ones) would scuff at what they would say as a meaningless chapter. But I understand how valuable it is for your characters to seem like ordinary people. In the midst of problems, they order pizzas and salads and buffalo wings. I love your style. Very realistic.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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People who just come into your story not having read some previous chapters (especially the ignorant ones) would scuff at what they would say as a meaningless chapter. But I understand how valuable it is for your characters to seem like ordinary people. In the midst of problems, they order pizzas and salads and buffalo wings. I love your style. Very realistic.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and undrstanding
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. It's true a man rushing behind the lady he loves can appear like a love sick puppy. On his own he would likely say and do the wrong thing. Advice from a woman is a treasured thing. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Very nice. It's true a man rushing behind the lady he loves can appear like a love sick puppy. On his own he would likely say and do the wrong thing. Advice from a woman is a treasured thing. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
What an enjoyable post Barbara... I love your wonderful dialog. This is a chapter for love, it's getting so romantic. I like very much the artwork...
I send love and Venezuelan Hugs to give you strength my friend,
:)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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What an enjoyable post Barbara... I love your wonderful dialog. This is a chapter for love, it's getting so romantic. I like very much the artwork...
I send love and Venezuelan Hugs to give you strength my friend,
:)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Oh my, I had had Irish hugs and now Venezuelan hugs. I am a truly blessed person. Thank you very much for the kind review. Plain old US hugs.
Comment from darknessgone
Mary Pat stood in the doorway with her hands on her hips. "Cash, you won't look like a lovesick dog, you'll give her the impression you don't think she's capable of handling things. No woman want's a man to believe that."
LOVE that line! Beautifully written and kept me interested the entire time! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Mary Pat stood in the doorway with her hands on her hips. "Cash, you won't look like a lovesick dog, you'll give her the impression you don't think she's capable of handling things. No woman want's a man to believe that."
LOVE that line! Beautifully written and kept me interested the entire time! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Opps-one spag-- Marry Pat nodded. Another great chapter in this interesting novel. Are you on spring break this week? I hope your son is recovering. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Opps-one spag-- Marry Pat nodded. Another great chapter in this interesting novel. Are you on spring break this week? I hope your son is recovering. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 20-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the catch. Again, I honestly do edit. I was on spring break last week. Back to the old grind. I have made the change.
Comment from smudge
Paige retreated to her room an wouldn't open the door. Cash had no idea how to handle the situation but after advice her favourite ice cream did it.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Paige retreated to her room an wouldn't open the door. Cash had no idea how to handle the situation but after advice her favourite ice cream did it.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from donaldww
I've been away for a few months, but I can see Cash is still chasing Paige, and she has developed a few amorous feelings for him. As usual, she's in some kind of trouble, and the stalwart Cash there to give her emotional support.
Both true to their characters!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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I've been away for a few months, but I can see Cash is still chasing Paige, and she has developed a few amorous feelings for him. As usual, she's in some kind of trouble, and the stalwart Cash there to give her emotional support.
Both true to their characters!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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I know. This novel isn't as long as it appears. I have had to post short because of my paying job. Thank you for the kind review.
