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Comment from angelface2
This is very well written, Barbara. I am wondering about one line. It says Billy Joe knelt down so there eyes met. Since Nala drives a car I thinking how short is this girl?
Cash had walked her to the door, so she wasn't sitting down. Nice chapter. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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This is very well written, Barbara. I am wondering about one line. It says Billy Joe knelt down so there eyes met. Since Nala drives a car I thinking how short is this girl?
Cash had walked her to the door, so she wasn't sitting down. Nice chapter. Miss Sally
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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When everybody walked into the manager's office, I state 'There sat Nala'. I guess I could stay she stood before she left with Cash. I just figured everybody would know that. Thank you for your idea.
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I thought that too. Barbara, but I reread it and it says Cash took her hand and led her to the door. That was before Billy Joe talked to her.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
I was wondering what had happened to Nala, and the sculduggery at the store fitted the Walker image nicely.
Excellent resolution of this part of the story. Well done.
Patrick
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Hi Barbara,
I was wondering what had happened to Nala, and the sculduggery at the store fitted the Walker image nicely.
Excellent resolution of this part of the story. Well done.
Patrick
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from buzclick
I liked this piece. It is classic soap opera.
Larry sat down and ran his fingers through his medium length dirty blond hair. "I'm going to be fired, aren't I?"
"Looks like it. My attorney will be in touch. Losing your job is the least of your problems. Since you're the asst. manager, I may sue the entire grocery chain." Paige titled her head toward sirens. "The police have finally made it."
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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I liked this piece. It is classic soap opera.
Larry sat down and ran his fingers through his medium length dirty blond hair. "I'm going to be fired, aren't I?"
"Looks like it. My attorney will be in touch. Losing your job is the least of your problems. Since you're the asst. manager, I may sue the entire grocery chain." Paige titled her head toward sirens. "The police have finally made it."
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from elgone
Apparently premiere members only get to give out six stars ratings. Oh well. I'm just like a lowly newbie, reading only. LOL. Anyway I like this. I don't think people realize how accurate this is in some places in Dixie, the way Nala is treated and how the good ol' boys are connected with the local police.
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Apparently premiere members only get to give out six stars ratings. Oh well. I'm just like a lowly newbie, reading only. LOL. Anyway I like this. I don't think people realize how accurate this is in some places in Dixie, the way Nala is treated and how the good ol' boys are connected with the local police.
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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I don't think they realize it either. But racism is alive and well. I will still send hugs your direction, even without sixes. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Gungalo
Poor Nala it seems that someone is out to get her for her closeness to Paige. She would never steal money from Paige so they picked the wrong thing. Sigh.
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Poor Nala it seems that someone is out to get her for her closeness to Paige. She would never steal money from Paige so they picked the wrong thing. Sigh.
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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I felt sorry for Nala and she couldn't do anything because she's black and in the south. Thank you for the kind review.
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Smile.
Comment from c_lucas
Well it looks like Paige is finally freed from all the pests. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Well it looks like Paige is finally freed from all the pests. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Free of pests should allow time for her and Cash. We shall see. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
