Savannah Love
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Comment from bhogg
Barbara - I love how you intertwine your characters and create a group of friends who truly do care for one another. Yes, driven by dialog, but that certainly zipped me right through. Very professional. Those Southern folks and all their cousins!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Barbara - I love how you intertwine your characters and create a group of friends who truly do care for one another. Yes, driven by dialog, but that certainly zipped me right through. Very professional. Those Southern folks and all their cousins!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Cajungirl
Another well-written,interesting and exciting chapter. Paige is so wonderful taking up for Nala like she did. I am enjoying your novel very much.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Another well-written,interesting and exciting chapter. Paige is so wonderful taking up for Nala like she did. I am enjoying your novel very much.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from AprilShower
I hope your son be okay by his birthday, Barbara.
Paige wants some time alone. Is it because she assistance in killing Walker. These people who are giving them so much trouble are prejudiced. Nala has been treated awful. It has to hurt to be treated this way.
April
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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I hope your son be okay by his birthday, Barbara.
Paige wants some time alone. Is it because she assistance in killing Walker. These people who are giving them so much trouble are prejudiced. Nala has been treated awful. It has to hurt to be treated this way.
April
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014
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Yes, it does hurt. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
There's no end to the Walkers trying to use their influence and make trouble for Paige and anyone she's associated with. The attempt to accuse Nalia of theft is just one more item. As it turns out, the accuser, Larry, is married to a Walker cousin. I thought Paige came down a bit hard on Larry, if he was paid by Walker to cause trouble for Nallia. Maybe she's over-reacting after her experience with Walker. This really holds the reader's interest. judi
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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There's no end to the Walkers trying to use their influence and make trouble for Paige and anyone she's associated with. The attempt to accuse Nalia of theft is just one more item. As it turns out, the accuser, Larry, is married to a Walker cousin. I thought Paige came down a bit hard on Larry, if he was paid by Walker to cause trouble for Nallia. Maybe she's over-reacting after her experience with Walker. This really holds the reader's interest. judi
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I think Paige has had enough of all this nonsense.
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You're so welcome. Hope she can still enjoy the house after all she's been through in it. judi
Comment from Writingfundimension
I love how Paige stands up for Nala. This was a great chapter with lots of vindication in rooting another of the rats causing problems. Well done, Barbara.
I'm glad to read your son's situation is improving.
Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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I love how Paige stands up for Nala. This was a great chapter with lots of vindication in rooting another of the rats causing problems. Well done, Barbara.
I'm glad to read your son's situation is improving.
Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You're very welcome, Barbara. :0)
Comment from kiwijenny
I,like Paige's fiery spirit and gumption.....there is a typo..She needs to alone for a while....be alone...
I will be praying for your son...Grapefruit seed oil...will help. It is so cleansing....
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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I,like Paige's fiery spirit and gumption.....there is a typo..She needs to alone for a while....be alone...
I will be praying for your son...Grapefruit seed oil...will help. It is so cleansing....
God bless
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the catch. I will fix that. Thank you for asking about Steven. He's home, but may still be facing surgery.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige threatens the assistant manager after he detains nala illegally when walker paid him to
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where paige threatens the assistant manager after he detains nala illegally when walker paid him to
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Good flow, Barbara, and good use of dialogue. Paige is not one to mess with, is she? I think Cash should follow her to her room whether she wants to be alone or not. LOL! Can't wait until those two get together.
Well done, my friend. Hope your son is doing okay.
Av
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Good flow, Barbara, and good use of dialogue. Paige is not one to mess with, is she? I think Cash should follow her to her room whether she wants to be alone or not. LOL! Can't wait until those two get together.
Well done, my friend. Hope your son is doing okay.
Av
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Steven is home but still facing surgery. Thank you for the kind review and asking about my son.
Comment from tango494
I've not read the other parts of the story but the reading was easy to follow. I always enjoy your dialogues. They are well crafted and guide the reader effortlessly through the story. Another excellent submission!!!!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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I've not read the other parts of the story but the reading was easy to follow. I always enjoy your dialogues. They are well crafted and guide the reader effortlessly through the story. Another excellent submission!!!!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Ben Colder
Are we going to fine a treasure? If so how aboutr you and splitting it before the governement gets it. Good story Barbara. Blessings
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Are we going to fine a treasure? If so how aboutr you and splitting it before the governement gets it. Good story Barbara. Blessings
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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I'll ask Bradley if there is a treasure. He really hasn't told me yet. Thank you for the kind review.
