Savannah Love
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Comment from barkingdog
Hi, barbara. I can't believe that I missed a post. It's well written, and I always enjoy your dialogue.
I hope you son is better today. Did they find out what caused the lesion?
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hi, barbara. I can't believe that I missed a post. It's well written, and I always enjoy your dialogue.
I hope you son is better today. Did they find out what caused the lesion?
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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I didn't post at my usual time because of Steven. No idea as of right now what caused it. It's extremely rare. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
Walker was really a horrid guy, wasn't he. Great chapter and I am glad I went back to read it. I am off to read the next one.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Walker was really a horrid guy, wasn't he. Great chapter and I am glad I went back to read it. I am off to read the next one.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you for reviewing this when no moneys attached.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Billy Joe knelt down so their eyes met. "Neither's mine." He patted her hand as he took the keys. - Oh I need to meet my Billy Joe. I swear that good ole' boy is working his way into my heart.
Poor Paige, she hasn't had a chance to really process killing Walker. Or considered the ramifications concerning the rest of the Walker family. She's gonna have a lot on her plate.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Billy Joe knelt down so their eyes met. "Neither's mine." He patted her hand as he took the keys. - Oh I need to meet my Billy Joe. I swear that good ole' boy is working his way into my heart.
Poor Paige, she hasn't had a chance to really process killing Walker. Or considered the ramifications concerning the rest of the Walker family. She's gonna have a lot on her plate.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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She sure does. Billy Joe is a sweet guy. Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
I am sorry for taking so long to review this post. I thought it had th usual good dialog, but unless I missed something, you need another part between this posy and the last.
For example, what happened to Dwayne Walker's body? I'm sure they didn't just leave him lying there and go looking for Nala. If they had called the police, I'm sure they would have taken up the rest of the say investigating his death. Nala would have been the least of their worries once the investigation started.
Obviously the police were called to deal with charges against Nala, but wouldn't they still be working on Walker's death?
I know you were distracted ivwer your son's heath, but I think you have a major story flaw that needs to be fixed.
As usual I send you love and Irish Hugs for support with your writing,
Roger
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Hi Barbara:)
I am sorry for taking so long to review this post. I thought it had th usual good dialog, but unless I missed something, you need another part between this posy and the last.
For example, what happened to Dwayne Walker's body? I'm sure they didn't just leave him lying there and go looking for Nala. If they had called the police, I'm sure they would have taken up the rest of the say investigating his death. Nala would have been the least of their worries once the investigation started.
Obviously the police were called to deal with charges against Nala, but wouldn't they still be working on Walker's death?
I know you were distracted ivwer your son's heath, but I think you have a major story flaw that needs to be fixed.
As usual I send you love and Irish Hugs for support with your writing,
Roger
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Detective Davis came to the house. Yes, the police was called and Paige was rather feisty with them, talking about if they had done their job; it wouldn't have come to this. Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
I think you are tying things up nicely. I especially
like how you never let Paige lose faith in Nala and how
Cash and Billy JHoe never allow Nala think too little of
herself.
I'm glad to hear things are better with your son. I pray
he will continue to get better.
love,
jan
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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barbara:
I think you are tying things up nicely. I especially
like how you never let Paige lose faith in Nala and how
Cash and Billy JHoe never allow Nala think too little of
herself.
I'm glad to hear things are better with your son. I pray
he will continue to get better.
love,
jan
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your prayers. He has doctors' appointments Tuesday and Wednesday. We'll see then. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from pbroussard209
Poor Nala, what an ordeal. She goes to buy food and get detained and accused of stealing from her employer. Paige handled the whole situation well. I love strong characters who are not afraid to stand up for themselves or their friends. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Poor Nala, what an ordeal. She goes to buy food and get detained and accused of stealing from her employer. Paige handled the whole situation well. I love strong characters who are not afraid to stand up for themselves or their friends. Great chapter.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from rtobaygo
I didn't realize Paige had so much grit...she stood her ground and got results. Will Paige have continuing problems with the Walkers?
Take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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I didn't realize Paige had so much grit...she stood her ground and got results. Will Paige have continuing problems with the Walkers?
Take care,
Ray
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Thank you for kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Barbara, I haven't been on the site a lot, so I missed the news about your son - I hope he is recovering well.
This is another enjoyable chapter part, and a good 'twist' - it was unexpected and really well-done. Nala must have been so worried, and Paige must be fuming.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Barbara, I haven't been on the site a lot, so I missed the news about your son - I hope he is recovering well.
This is another enjoyable chapter part, and a good 'twist' - it was unexpected and really well-done. Nala must have been so worried, and Paige must be fuming.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Steven is doing better. Still not 100% and is still facing surgery. Thank you for asking. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good clear dialogue between the characters. Good transition of events. The piece gets intense as Paige argued with Larry. Larry finally breaks down with guilt and sadness. Nice steady pace leading to a conclusion of take out, comfort and alone time. Good work.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Good clear dialogue between the characters. Good transition of events. The piece gets intense as Paige argued with Larry. Larry finally breaks down with guilt and sadness. Nice steady pace leading to a conclusion of take out, comfort and alone time. Good work.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - seems those Walkers have a great big pocket - yet Paige holds her ground time and time again. Great writing with strong imagery, easy smooth reading and I thought the scene with Larry Matter was great.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Dear Barbara - seems those Walkers have a great big pocket - yet Paige holds her ground time and time again. Great writing with strong imagery, easy smooth reading and I thought the scene with Larry Matter was great.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 13-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
