Savannah Love
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Comment from judiverse
This is certainly worth a six. Great action in this. Walker doesn't give up easily. Did Bradley actually move the knife? He's one determined ghost. I was wondering what the impact of stabbing Walker will be on Paige. Walker is certainly scum, driven by money. It does seem like Davis and the police have been slow to take any action. I wonder what they will make of Paige's part in stabbing Walker, although as commented it could have been prevented had the police acted sooner. There's still the little matter of the treasure. Maybe Bradley will not lead them to it. judi
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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This is certainly worth a six. Great action in this. Walker doesn't give up easily. Did Bradley actually move the knife? He's one determined ghost. I was wondering what the impact of stabbing Walker will be on Paige. Walker is certainly scum, driven by money. It does seem like Davis and the police have been slow to take any action. I wonder what they will make of Paige's part in stabbing Walker, although as commented it could have been prevented had the police acted sooner. There's still the little matter of the treasure. Maybe Bradley will not lead them to it. judi
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I don't know what Bradley is up too. I hope he fills me in soon. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Plenty of violence in this chapter. Seems Paige has now killed Walker. Time the treasure was found.
Following sentence a bit confusing:
Cash lifted Walker from her and repeated slugged Walker's already battered body.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Plenty of violence in this chapter. Seems Paige has now killed Walker. Time the treasure was found.
Following sentence a bit confusing:
Cash lifted Walker from her and repeated slugged Walker's already battered body.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I will recheck that sentence. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Leineco
Actually, I have not read the previous chapters. but believe it or not, short of knowing who every one is, this post made sense to me (by the time I got to the end). I may not know the fine details, but obviously Walker has been an ongoing threat, there is a treasure in question causing confrontation and a ghost sometimes assists the haggard heroine Paige.
How'd I do?
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Actually, I have not read the previous chapters. but believe it or not, short of knowing who every one is, this post made sense to me (by the time I got to the end). I may not know the fine details, but obviously Walker has been an ongoing threat, there is a treasure in question causing confrontation and a ghost sometimes assists the haggard heroine Paige.
How'd I do?
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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LOL You did pretty well. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - this is a well penned post and definitely gave Walker a run for his money - though you elude to Walker being dead - perhaps the bugger will survive. Great action, strong expressive writing which was a great read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Edit/suggestion:
"Paige!" Cash lifted Walker from her and repeated slugged Walker's " // repeatedly ??
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Dear Barbara - this is a well penned post and definitely gave Walker a run for his money - though you elude to Walker being dead - perhaps the bugger will survive. Great action, strong expressive writing which was a great read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Edit/suggestion:
"Paige!" Cash lifted Walker from her and repeated slugged Walker's " // repeatedly ??
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and the help. I have fixed the problem.
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Wonderful writing :)
Enjoy your day.
Hugs
M
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like Paige got to make her statement in the end. I am sure her repeatedly stabbing Walker help send his to his rewards. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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It looks like Paige got to make her statement in the end. I am sure her repeatedly stabbing Walker help send his to his rewards. This is very well written.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Gungalo
I think you missed posting this one Barb. Check it and you will see that today's post has not shown up. Did you do it or the site?
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I think you missed posting this one Barb. Check it and you will see that today's post has not shown up. Did you do it or the site?
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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It is all there now. I was told if I post only the picture then put in the body, I won't have all the ?'s, It seemed to work.
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WHo told you that? LOL. It should work right the very first time.
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Nope, every time I have posted for the pasted 3 weeks, I am plagued with ?'s all over my post. It seems to have worked.
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Wow.
Comment from adewpearl
Barbara just to alert you - I received notification of this posting, but there is not today's post - just the recap of the story and the previous post. Let me know when the whole thing is released :-) Brooke
ok - now the whole thing has posted :-)
excellent use of action verbs to add drama to the attack scene
I love that Bradley helped her :-) I don't even believe in ghosts but you're making a believer of me :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Barbara just to alert you - I received notification of this posting, but there is not today's post - just the recap of the story and the previous post. Let me know when the whole thing is released :-) Brooke
ok - now the whole thing has posted :-)
excellent use of action verbs to add drama to the attack scene
I love that Bradley helped her :-) I don't even believe in ghosts but you're making a believer of me :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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The whole thing is posted. I was told if I post the picture first then go back and put in the body in, I won't have the ?'s. I hope so.
