Savannah Love
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Comment from DonandVicki
Good solid chapter for the continuation of your story. I like the way that you hold the readers attention with your excellent character development. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Good solid chapter for the continuation of your story. I like the way that you hold the readers attention with your excellent character development. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love 'CHAPTER EIGHTEEN; PART THREE.' I was pleased to read another one of your most superb chapters, Barbara. I will 'stick' with you, regardless. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Savannah Love 'CHAPTER EIGHTEEN; PART THREE.' I was pleased to read another one of your most superb chapters, Barbara. I will 'stick' with you, regardless. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from JM daSilva
So you have some violence in your story. I know you're sensitive and don't like it, but sometimes that's the way things are.
I would change this sentence, because it felt like the she was needed.
She tried to raise it and hit Dwayne but from her angle(, she) couldn't.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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So you have some violence in your story. I know you're sensitive and don't like it, but sometimes that's the way things are.
I would change this sentence, because it felt like the she was needed.
She tried to raise it and hit Dwayne but from her angle(, she) couldn't.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I will fix it. Thank you for catching it. I hate violence, but I couldn't see any way else to play it out. I sort of dug myself into a hole.
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I know. Actually, I love violence, but at the gym. I think it's good to be ready, but not to dwell on it.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Another good post, with lots of action. The struggle with Walker was well portrayed. Good dialogue and flow. Yet again, Bradley steps up and helps Paige.
Well done, Barbara.
Av
(")Cash walked over to Paige - remove quotation mark.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Another good post, with lots of action. The struggle with Walker was well portrayed. Good dialogue and flow. Yet again, Bradley steps up and helps Paige.
Well done, Barbara.
Av
(")Cash walked over to Paige - remove quotation mark.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from elgone
So Walker is dead, but the story isn't over yet. Where is the treasure if there even is one anymore and Cash and Paige have to get married or something, right. LOL.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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So Walker is dead, but the story isn't over yet. Where is the treasure if there even is one anymore and Cash and Paige have to get married or something, right. LOL.
E
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Barbara, this is an excellent continuation - I am behind, and for the first time, missed reviewing a chapter, but I had to read it, since the part before it left me dangling. I'll review that next, but I wanted to see what was coming. :)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Barbara, this is an excellent continuation - I am behind, and for the first time, missed reviewing a chapter, but I had to read it, since the part before it left me dangling. I'll review that next, but I wanted to see what was coming. :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Gert sherwood
No way Barb,
am I getting tired of reading your novel
to me each chapter gets more exciting.
(I'm sure Paige will be glad when this whole mess is solved)
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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No way Barb,
am I getting tired of reading your novel
to me each chapter gets more exciting.
(I'm sure Paige will be glad when this whole mess is solved)
Gert
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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you are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Norbanus
I'm sure glad to hear that you're not finished yet, Barbara. When do you expect to have a printed version available. I want to buy a copy. My wife refuses to read on screen but wants read this story.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I'm sure glad to hear that you're not finished yet, Barbara. When do you expect to have a printed version available. I want to buy a copy. My wife refuses to read on screen but wants read this story.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I will see what I can do. I honestly don't know when I will have it finished. It depends on my work schedule. Tell your wife, I will send her a printed copy if I have to when I'm done.
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We'll make it official, by being your first cash sale. Please let me know when it's ready.
Comment from abbasjoy
Wow! Finally Walker gets what was coming to him. What a creep! But Paige is fortunate that Cash and Bill Joe come to her rescue, or it could have ended very badly for her. Or was it Bradley?
Love the fast movement in this chapter, and although Walker got what he deserved, the question is , will Cash or Paige be charged or will it be self defense?
Great chapter with the dialogue flowing well.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Wow! Finally Walker gets what was coming to him. What a creep! But Paige is fortunate that Cash and Bill Joe come to her rescue, or it could have ended very badly for her. Or was it Bradley?
Love the fast movement in this chapter, and although Walker got what he deserved, the question is , will Cash or Paige be charged or will it be self defense?
Great chapter with the dialogue flowing well.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from angelface2
This is wonderful Barbara. Good old Morgan came to the rescue. Dogs are so faithful. I assume Walker is dead. Nicely done. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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This is wonderful Barbara. Good old Morgan came to the rescue. Dogs are so faithful. I assume Walker is dead. Nicely done. Miss Sally
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Yes, Walker is dead and hopefully so are the problems. Thank you for the kind review.
