Savannah Love
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53 total reviews
Comment from AprilShower
How did I miss this chapter? Guess my editing is taking up much more time than I thought. There's some action in this part of a chapter. It's well written, too. Now I must go and read the following chapter. Barbara.
I have no suggestions.
April
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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How did I miss this chapter? Guess my editing is taking up much more time than I thought. There's some action in this part of a chapter. It's well written, too. Now I must go and read the following chapter. Barbara.
I have no suggestions.
April
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review an dropping by.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Paige shows the stuff she's made of, and I'm pleased to see who is behind all of this get the surprise he's getting in a fighting mad Paige. (still chuckling) Good stuff!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Paige shows the stuff she's made of, and I'm pleased to see who is behind all of this get the surprise he's getting in a fighting mad Paige. (still chuckling) Good stuff!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Apparently Paige no longer needs a bounty hunter to find Dwayne Walker,because he has found her with little protection. Somehow, I think Walker wishes he hadn't found Paige, as she demonstrates her self defense skills. Will Paige succeed in diksabling Walker until help arrives?
Walker's demands that she give him what he wants only reinforce the idea of an old treasure.Great dialog as the mystery appears near an end.
More love and Irish Hugs as you head toward a great finish.
Roger
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Hi Barbara:)
Apparently Paige no longer needs a bounty hunter to find Dwayne Walker,because he has found her with little protection. Somehow, I think Walker wishes he hadn't found Paige, as she demonstrates her self defense skills. Will Paige succeed in diksabling Walker until help arrives?
Walker's demands that she give him what he wants only reinforce the idea of an old treasure.Great dialog as the mystery appears near an end.
More love and Irish Hugs as you head toward a great finish.
Roger
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sorry you had to read this with no pumps attached.
Comment from artisart4u
It sounds like a good drama narrative story-which the storyteller is able to resolve a problem through plot, characters and setting.
I am sure all your works are as good as this, keep up your good writing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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It sounds like a good drama narrative story-which the storyteller is able to resolve a problem through plot, characters and setting.
I am sure all your works are as good as this, keep up your good writing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jessie Denniel
Exciting! I like your story. I like the way your characters think. I like the presentation. Thank you for sharing this one. I enjoyed reading it alot. Hope to read more from you. Very very well done!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Exciting! I like your story. I like the way your characters think. I like the presentation. Thank you for sharing this one. I enjoyed reading it alot. Hope to read more from you. Very very well done!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
I enjoyed reading your story and the imagery is no good, and found no reason to suggest any changes. Your art work for the story blends well. I can almost feel the pain for the poor chap LOL. Mary
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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I enjoyed reading your story and the imagery is no good, and found no reason to suggest any changes. Your art work for the story blends well. I can almost feel the pain for the poor chap LOL. Mary
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from GracieAnn
barbara, I have not read the preceding chapters but I can say that what I have read in this chapter, the dialog is sound, is real to life, and is suspenseful. A very solid storyline from what I can tell. Well done. :0 Gracie/Ann
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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barbara, I have not read the preceding chapters but I can say that what I have read in this chapter, the dialog is sound, is real to life, and is suspenseful. A very solid storyline from what I can tell. Well done. :0 Gracie/Ann
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from James Dooney
Jesus the poor dude looks like he has just been kicked in the nuts !!!! Gosh I hope he wasnt that much of a bastard !!! Good story !
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Jesus the poor dude looks like he has just been kicked in the nuts !!!! Gosh I hope he wasnt that much of a bastard !!! Good story !
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from buzclick
Your right about the ?s They are a pain. I don't have that problem with my site but I just post SS and poetry. Having to chop up chapters is truly a hassle too.
Anyway I liked your action and found no obvious grammar or mis-spelling.
The story seems from the little I could read to be interesting. I would read more when it's posted.
Overall I say, Good job. worth reading more, congrats.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Your right about the ?s They are a pain. I don't have that problem with my site but I just post SS and poetry. Having to chop up chapters is truly a hassle too.
Anyway I liked your action and found no obvious grammar or mis-spelling.
The story seems from the little I could read to be interesting. I would read more when it's posted.
Overall I say, Good job. worth reading more, congrats.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from emrpoems
Love how you keep he action with Page and Walker going.
You have brought out the strength of your characters well and kept your reader's attention.
Good use of dialogue
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Love how you keep he action with Page and Walker going.
You have brought out the strength of your characters well and kept your reader's attention.
Good use of dialogue
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
