Savannah Love
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Comment from c_lucas
Paige can get in trouble even in her own kitchen. Evil Eddy sent his regards. Minus the question marks, this is very well written with a good read.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Paige can get in trouble even in her own kitchen. Evil Eddy sent his regards. Minus the question marks, this is very well written with a good read.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I have deleted all of them, don't know if they'll come back or not.
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Sounds like you deleted all of the reviews, instead of EE's handiwork.
Comment from Taffspride
An excellent chapter Barbara. but want to let you know that where you have quotation marks, they appear in the script as question marks, the site's phantom editor has struck again. I think I read you will need to go into advanced editor to correct them.
Would not mark you a lower rating, since I know it is something beyond your control.
Great reading, thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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An excellent chapter Barbara. but want to let you know that where you have quotation marks, they appear in the script as question marks, the site's phantom editor has struck again. I think I read you will need to go into advanced editor to correct them.
Would not mark you a lower rating, since I know it is something beyond your control.
Great reading, thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I have deleted all of them, don't know if they'll come back or not.
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It looks fine now Barbara.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment from Gert sherwood
Barb read you chapter, but my friend it would be a six if you take a look what evil Eddie did with all the ? marks.
Darn him.
Gert
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Barb read you chapter, but my friend it would be a six if you take a look what evil Eddie did with all the ? marks.
Darn him.
Gert
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I have deleted all of them, don't know if they'll come back or not.
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I will take a look right now.
Gert
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Looks good now much easier to read
Smiles
Gert
Comment from adewpearl
evil Eddie is throwing errant question marks your way
do his business, and then glanced - drop the comma
Good bantering tone in the dialogue
very flirtatious
All right, you go check - add comma
good suspenseful cliffhanger closing
Brooke
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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evil Eddie is throwing errant question marks your way
do his business, and then glanced - drop the comma
Good bantering tone in the dialogue
very flirtatious
All right, you go check - add comma
good suspenseful cliffhanger closing
Brooke
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I have deleted all of them, don't know if they'll come back or not.
