Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Another find chapter, Barbara. Your dialogue keeps the pace moving right along. The ghost made his presence known to Cash and Billy Joe. I guess they won't doubt him again.

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Thank you for the kind review. Cash, I think, is starting to come around. I doubt there's any hope for Billy Joe.

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

I think they are the victims of some sort of paranormal activity. All these stories of ghosts and treasure and pirates adds up. Good going on the story.

Hope to read on.
Cheers,
Sylvia

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

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Comment from Lynette Marie

Excellent

I just had to laugh. When are they going to admit that there really is something to Bradley's ghost? I like the addition of the ghost, and appreciate the story behind it in your previous installment. Great dialogue.

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Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

It sounds like the ghost rides in the car as well as creating havoc at the house. It also seems as though he quite capable of causing some harm to someone he doesn't like or to a non-believer. You story is very entertaining.

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Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Paige is showing a sense of humor over Cash's concerns. That's good. The haunting of the truck was a nice touch. Well done, Barbara. :) Nancy

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Comment from CALLAHANMR

Excellent

Hi Barbara:)
Another fine post with great dialog and imner play among the main characters.

If strange and seemingly supernatural events keep happening, both Cash and Billy Joe may start ti believe in ghosts.Indeed,if Bradley Bookman haunts the mansion, his picture may hold the clue to its location. Is that why it shifted on the wall as Dash watched?

Now Cash and Paige are secure enough with each other to kiss on her bedside.

Love and Irish Hugs to share as needed,

Roger

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Terrific ghostly shenanigans, barbara. I think Cash's determination to blame coincidence is wearing thin. And I like the way you let Paige show her tough side. Well done, as always. :0) Bev

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reply by Writingfundimension on 11-Feb-2014

My pleasure, Barbara. :0) Bev

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Wow, I guess he might begin to believe in ghosts, huh? If those things happened, I might even begin to believe. Good chapter, Barbara. Miss Sally

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Comment from dmt1967

Exceptional

This is such a good chapter it was a pleasure to read usually coming into a book this far gone is hard to judge but with your story it was easy the easiest six ever thank you for sharing

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Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

Seems Bradley is set on being mischievous for the moment. Well, he has got 'eternity' to play with som I suppose he can take his time over this. Cash better stop being so dubious before Bradley decides to prove something.

Patrick

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