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Comment from elgone
So it seems they need to get Bradley's help to find the treasure - if there is any. Except for the jewels and such, I'll bet a lot of it is confederate money - which if it is in good condition is probably worth something for collectors.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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So it seems they need to get Bradley's help to find the treasure - if there is any. Except for the jewels and such, I'll bet a lot of it is confederate money - which if it is in good condition is probably worth something for collectors.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Comment from jadapenn
Oh, goody, a ghost. The plot thickens. Now to dig for the treasure. I think they should try and contact Bradley. I enjoyed the visit with the old guys. Was nice to hear them chatting. luv jada
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Oh, goody, a ghost. The plot thickens. Now to dig for the treasure. I think they should try and contact Bradley. I enjoyed the visit with the old guys. Was nice to hear them chatting. luv jada
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Comment from judiverse
This is wonderful. I enjoyed the dialogue and Amos's story so much. Some interesting history about the Walkers, too, and how they put the slaves out to fight the pirates. Intriguing comments that the best way to locate the treasure would be to ask Bradley. That should be interesting. Maybe they could have a s©ance! Great touch at the end when Billy Joe says there's no such thing as ghosts and the car's engine stalls and the wind starts to pick up. It does seem that the Walkers have been mischief-making for generations. judi
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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This is wonderful. I enjoyed the dialogue and Amos's story so much. Some interesting history about the Walkers, too, and how they put the slaves out to fight the pirates. Intriguing comments that the best way to locate the treasure would be to ask Bradley. That should be interesting. Maybe they could have a s©ance! Great touch at the end when Billy Joe says there's no such thing as ghosts and the car's engine stalls and the wind starts to pick up. It does seem that the Walkers have been mischief-making for generations. judi
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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You're so welcome. Have a great week ahead. judi
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
It's best not to provoke a ghost who has already given a taste of his ability to be mischievous. Sounds as if Cash and Billy Joe are about to have a face to face encounter with Bradley Bookman (Deceased). Should be entertaining if nothing else.
Good chapter, and Amos ain't no fool either'. I think he knows more than he's letting on.
Patrick
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Hi Barbara,
It's best not to provoke a ghost who has already given a taste of his ability to be mischievous. Sounds as if Cash and Billy Joe are about to have a face to face encounter with Bradley Bookman (Deceased). Should be entertaining if nothing else.
Good chapter, and Amos ain't no fool either'. I think he knows more than he's letting on.
Patrick
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Comment from Ben Colder
This would make a movie, It seems to be getting better all the time. Or at least it seems that way to me. Great job. Blessings to you
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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This would make a movie, It seems to be getting better all the time. Or at least it seems that way to me. Great job. Blessings to you
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Never dropped by. Slide the way. It's snowing.
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LOL+, it's even cold and icy in TX
Comment from Janie King
Are you getting ready to let the guys meet "Bradley" so to say? You could have a bit of fun with them, especially since this is fiction. Good chapter. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Are you getting ready to let the guys meet "Bradley" so to say? You could have a bit of fun with them, especially since this is fiction. Good chapter. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
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Comment from pbroussard209
Great place to stop the chapter, I am so glad I found your story, I am really loving the characters and the story line. looking forward to the next one to see what is going on. why did the car stall and what's with the wind?
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Great place to stop the chapter, I am so glad I found your story, I am really loving the characters and the story line. looking forward to the next one to see what is going on. why did the car stall and what's with the wind?
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Comment from Sankey
Whooohoooo. I winder when Cash is gonna come around to believing in Bradley Bookman huh! Good work glad you are back. Have been doing a bit while you were away. Hope you will have a look at my stuff. I think you did already anyway. Hope there is more coming in this!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Whooohoooo. I winder when Cash is gonna come around to believing in Bradley Bookman huh! Good work glad you are back. Have been doing a bit while you were away. Hope you will have a look at my stuff. I think you did already anyway. Hope there is more coming in this!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
Your sense of dialogue and dialect sure bring this chapter alive. I only found itsy-bitsy things to fix:
He'll tell ya or at least I bet he'd tell dat purdy Yankee."
Put comma after He'll tell ya
"Sho didn't"
Put period after didn't
Its fifty-nine years,"
Its should be It's
"I think the Walkers whole family's evil."
I would put an apostrophe after Walkers to show possessive form.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Your sense of dialogue and dialect sure bring this chapter alive. I only found itsy-bitsy things to fix:
He'll tell ya or at least I bet he'd tell dat purdy Yankee."
Put comma after He'll tell ya
"Sho didn't"
Put period after didn't
Its fifty-nine years,"
Its should be It's
"I think the Walkers whole family's evil."
I would put an apostrophe after Walkers to show possessive form.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Sorry it took so long to get to you. I needed time to make the corrections. Thank you for catching them.
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No problem. I am still trying to catch up on other stuff, too, ha ha.
Comment from Gungalo
Cash and Billy Joe are still trying to figure out this ghost business and I figured Amos knows a right bit more than he is lettin' on.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Cash and Billy Joe are still trying to figure out this ghost business and I figured Amos knows a right bit more than he is lettin' on.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Smile.
