Savannah Love
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43 total reviews
Comment from Sylvia Page
Just going over to see what I have missed in order to catch up on the story. Remember reading a part of this story awhile back. Think I can carry on from here.
cheers
Sylvia
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Just going over to see what I have missed in order to catch up on the story. Remember reading a part of this story awhile back. Think I can carry on from here.
cheers
Sylvia
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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I'm sorry you had to read this with no points attached. Thank you.
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Perfectly alright. I enjoyed reading and I don't look for points. I would have read further if I had the time. I am a little behind in my reviews.
Comment from bookishfabler
Hello there. I like this character. I can hear him speaking without it being too much. Well done. I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was smooth and easy conversation, especially at the end with him owning the place and his Yankee wife. Nice.
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Hello there. I like this character. I can hear him speaking without it being too much. Well done. I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was smooth and easy conversation, especially at the end with him owning the place and his Yankee wife. Nice.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Such a well-penned and enjoyable read. I continue to find the dialogue interesting and the characters fun and lively. I look forward the next posting.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Such a well-penned and enjoyable read. I continue to find the dialogue interesting and the characters fun and lively. I look forward the next posting.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
The characters seemed interesting and the dialogue real. The story about Walker and the pirates was interesting. It was a good thing Walker could defend themselves from the pirates. The reader should know that once someone declares that there is not such thing as ghosts that something will happen.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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The characters seemed interesting and the dialogue real. The story about Walker and the pirates was interesting. It was a good thing Walker could defend themselves from the pirates. The reader should know that once someone declares that there is not such thing as ghosts that something will happen.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I am not sure what to correct to receive a five star.
Comment from rama devi
HI dear B--Sorry I have not been able to read all chapters, but it's always easy for me to dive back in as your writing I well paced, easy to read and he authentic dialog enhances characterization. I get drawn into the scene of your chapter but do not know the full plot to comment intelligently on it. :)
You do a great job of enhancing characterization by describing gestures and other sense in action tags. Well done.
One suggestion:
*Finally(,) Billy Joe asked, "What do ya think about the ghost and the treasure?"
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"I think the Walkers whole family's evil."
I'm not sure is there should be an apostrophe before or after the 's' on walkers...depends if their name has an s usually, or not.
Walker's or Walkers'
Nice closing hook with a wind picking up at the 'negation of ghosts' Witty!
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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HI dear B--Sorry I have not been able to read all chapters, but it's always easy for me to dive back in as your writing I well paced, easy to read and he authentic dialog enhances characterization. I get drawn into the scene of your chapter but do not know the full plot to comment intelligently on it. :)
You do a great job of enhancing characterization by describing gestures and other sense in action tags. Well done.
One suggestion:
*Finally(,) Billy Joe asked, "What do ya think about the ghost and the treasure?"
*
"I think the Walkers whole family's evil."
I'm not sure is there should be an apostrophe before or after the 's' on walkers...depends if their name has an s usually, or not.
Walker's or Walkers'
Nice closing hook with a wind picking up at the 'negation of ghosts' Witty!
Love,
rd
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check those areas.
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Comment from dancerwriter
Even though I have not read any other chapters I found this one to be quite interesting. Writing the language used at the time is one thing I do with my novels. It really accentuates the history and stories of those days. This one sounds really good and no doubt the rest of the story will be. Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Even though I have not read any other chapters I found this one to be quite interesting. Writing the language used at the time is one thing I do with my novels. It really accentuates the history and stories of those days. This one sounds really good and no doubt the rest of the story will be. Lesley.J.Mooney(Dancerwriter)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I got sidetracks and have missed a few chapters since the trip to Atlanta, and although I was a little lost, that didn't keep the story and the writing from being entertaining. I don't personally talk like your characters, but some people from where I'm from do, which makes it even better for me. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Well, I got sidetracks and have missed a few chapters since the trip to Atlanta, and although I was a little lost, that didn't keep the story and the writing from being entertaining. I don't personally talk like your characters, but some people from where I'm from do, which makes it even better for me. Great job.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I don't speak like that myself, but I know people who do. I am not making fun of them. I am trying to show their character. Thank you for the kind review.
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I understand. I never thought for a minute that you were making fun.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
"You didn't tell them you owned the place, did you?" - Love it, way to funny.
"One thing I know for sure; there ain't no such thing as ghosts." Billy Joe tapped the dashboard. The car's engine stalled. Billy Joe's eyes widened as he whispered, "Cash, did the wind just pick up?" - Love it!
Respect the ghost, respect him. Especially, since Bradley is watching out for Paige. Goodness knows she needs as many guardian angles (or other) as she can get.
Also the character of Amos is so endearing. I can just envision an older man with an unruly white afro, dishin the country lore. Just perfect.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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"You didn't tell them you owned the place, did you?" - Love it, way to funny.
"One thing I know for sure; there ain't no such thing as ghosts." Billy Joe tapped the dashboard. The car's engine stalled. Billy Joe's eyes widened as he whispered, "Cash, did the wind just pick up?" - Love it!
Respect the ghost, respect him. Especially, since Bradley is watching out for Paige. Goodness knows she needs as many guardian angles (or other) as she can get.
Also the character of Amos is so endearing. I can just envision an older man with an unruly white afro, dishin the country lore. Just perfect.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the compliment. That's the way I envisioned Amos too. I enjoy him so much that he will return. Thank you again.
Comment from Lynette Marie
Another outstanding chapter. Amos cracks me up. The intrigue with the treasure continues on. You left us with even more suspense, which I enjoy immensely. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Another outstanding chapter. Amos cracks me up. The intrigue with the treasure continues on. You left us with even more suspense, which I enjoy immensely. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you dropping by.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
When is this man going to clue in? I think Bradley's going to have to materialize full body apparition before Cash agrees that, yes, there's such a thing as ghosts.
This was well done, Barbara. The challenge of the dialogue was well met, and I really enjoyed the little bits of humour, not to mention the creativity of the backstory.
Bravo.
Av
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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When is this man going to clue in? I think Bradley's going to have to materialize full body apparition before Cash agrees that, yes, there's such a thing as ghosts.
This was well done, Barbara. The challenge of the dialogue was well met, and I really enjoyed the little bits of humour, not to mention the creativity of the backstory.
Bravo.
Av
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I always enjoy hearing from you.
