Savannah Love
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Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbie, a nice chapter full of action. I liked the red herring with the alligator. It gave the reader a breather. So the plot thickens with the treasure. Well penned. luv jada
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Hi Barbie, a nice chapter full of action. I liked the red herring with the alligator. It gave the reader a breather. So the plot thickens with the treasure. Well penned. luv jada
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I am hoping to use the gator later. We will see.
Comment from mumsyone
Barbara, My son took me to one of my favorite restaurants yesterday (one I haven't been to for a long time), and I got a BIG piece of peach pie to bring home. I know it will be good because the place is known for its homemade pies, and customers were buying slices like crazy. In fact, "our table" bought nine slices in all. (Besides peach, I got strawberry-rhubarb, another favorite.)
A good continuing chapter. I expect that the boys will be searching the underground tunnels before long?
As the waitress,(no comma) poured fresh cups of coffee, Amos continued,
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Barbara, My son took me to one of my favorite restaurants yesterday (one I haven't been to for a long time), and I got a BIG piece of peach pie to bring home. I know it will be good because the place is known for its homemade pies, and customers were buying slices like crazy. In fact, "our table" bought nine slices in all. (Besides peach, I got strawberry-rhubarb, another favorite.)
A good continuing chapter. I expect that the boys will be searching the underground tunnels before long?
As the waitress,(no comma) poured fresh cups of coffee, Amos continued,
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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I like strawberry-rhubarb myself and I haven't hade it in years. Oh my, you brought back memories. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
A ghost helping get the son/grandson snaffle the treasure from the Walkers - who seem to have happily played the Yankee card when it suited them - is a nice touch. I wouldn't mind having a helpful ghost like that batting for me!
A 'gator that big would be an old one - and he must have been well fed down the years.
Patrick
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Hi Barbara,
A ghost helping get the son/grandson snaffle the treasure from the Walkers - who seem to have happily played the Yankee card when it suited them - is a nice touch. I wouldn't mind having a helpful ghost like that batting for me!
A 'gator that big would be an old one - and he must have been well fed down the years.
Patrick
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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I may the gator again later. I am not sure. I kinda like the old guy. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this chapter very, very much. I found it informative and most definitely fascinating. Not sure if I would want to get that close to an alligator, they can be pretty scary critters. You have my curiosity piqued and I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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I enjoyed this chapter very, very much. I found it informative and most definitely fascinating. Not sure if I would want to get that close to an alligator, they can be pretty scary critters. You have my curiosity piqued and I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you for dropping by. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from Janie King
So there are underground tunnels and there is a treasure and one big alligator. Never ate any, not sure I'd really want to. Good chapter. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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So there are underground tunnels and there is a treasure and one big alligator. Never ate any, not sure I'd really want to. Good chapter. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Alligators happen to fascinate me because they date back to dinosaur times. Anyway, thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh they are getting closer to the treasure aren't they? It helped to talk to him for sure. I guess they will investigate the tunnels.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Oh they are getting closer to the treasure aren't they? It helped to talk to him for sure. I guess they will investigate the tunnels.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. It's always pleasure hearing from you.
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Smile.
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. These characters are just that real characters. I love the dialogue and the banter. And the small details that make it so real. I look forward to the next chapters
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Hello. These characters are just that real characters. I love the dialogue and the banter. And the small details that make it so real. I look forward to the next chapters
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Consider:
"As Amos moved closer, he studied Cash and Billy Joe and then pointed a corn cob pipe at Cash.
"Ya must be da man smitten by dat Yankee gal. I heard tell she's as purdy as a speckled pup."
Remember KISS, for ex:
"Billy Joe grinned. OMIT "...and looked at Cash.
"Nobody done found it...yet!
Regards:
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Consider:
"As Amos moved closer, he studied Cash and Billy Joe and then pointed a corn cob pipe at Cash.
"Ya must be da man smitten by dat Yankee gal. I heard tell she's as purdy as a speckled pup."
Remember KISS, for ex:
"Billy Joe grinned. OMIT "...and looked at Cash.
"Nobody done found it...yet!
Regards:
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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I have made those corrections. On this post. I need to back to my previous post and make the corrections on it. Thank you for your help.
Comment from c_lucas
There is nothing wrong about using Spiritual help as long as it gets ten per cent. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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There is nothing wrong about using Spiritual help as long as it gets ten per cent. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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I am sure Bradley got more than that for his help. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
