Comment from Tortie Heart

Excellent

Lovely! Enjoyed this, felt the strong characterisation through dialogue and enjoyed the appreciation of the pie too! Although I haven't read any of the other part of this book I found this chapter flowed well for me and the settings description was very good so I felt right into the story at Chapter Seventeen even. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Well it looks they have found the right source. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

Suggestion:
peach pie is mighty good." (tasty)
Umm this pie's sho'(sho' (is) good.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. Will make the corrections.

reply by c_lucas on 19-Jan-2014

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

Oh so Clyde knows something...hurray...this was a very good chapter. I love the tie in of Nala with Clyde. Good chapter. God loves you and is do too.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

What delightful dialogue in this chapter, Barbara - you work in interesting back story, and I love Amos's almost casual mention of ghost Bradley :-)
The mystery continues, and the characters remain very likable :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014

Thank you for the kind review. I wasn't going to use Amos when Cash and Billy Joe go back home, but I kind of like the old man.