Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Barb,
Love how Clyde could be bought for peach pie and 'nilla ice cream. Come to think of it---so could I. LOL
They just might find out something.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Hi, Barb,
Love how Clyde could be bought for peach pie and 'nilla ice cream. Come to think of it---so could I. LOL
They just might find out something.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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You are such a dear. Thank you.
Comment from JMUwrites
Wonderful chapter write here Barbara...I absolutely loved the interaction between your characters in this one!
Thanks for sharing, and now onto the newest installment I go!
Jeffrey
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Wonderful chapter write here Barbara...I absolutely loved the interaction between your characters in this one!
Thanks for sharing, and now onto the newest installment I go!
Jeffrey
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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I am sorry you had to read this with no points attached. Thank you for the kindness.
Comment from Sasha
I like this one. At least they found someone that might know something. Nice touch with the "peach pie and a big scoop of 'nilla ice cream"...sounds pretty good to me right now.
"I found one sentence you might want to look at:
we can finish the conversation to the parlor...you might want to change this to...we can take this conversation to the parlor...or...we can finish this conversation in the parlor...
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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I like this one. At least they found someone that might know something. Nice touch with the "peach pie and a big scoop of 'nilla ice cream"...sounds pretty good to me right now.
"I found one sentence you might want to look at:
we can finish the conversation to the parlor...you might want to change this to...we can take this conversation to the parlor...or...we can finish this conversation in the parlor...
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Thank you for catching that. I made the change.
Comment from JB Lynn
I understand why you placed the warning in your author's notes about the dialect, but as someone who only happens across your posts once in awhile, I wanted to tell you the dialect does not bother me at all. I think the main thing is that you don't tweak the spelling of every single word (that would get too clunky). I think the dialect, like the landscape, can almost become a character in and of itself because of where your story takes place. Without it, your story would not be as multi-dimensional. Great job. I always enjoy reading your chapters because they are so polished. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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I understand why you placed the warning in your author's notes about the dialect, but as someone who only happens across your posts once in awhile, I wanted to tell you the dialect does not bother me at all. I think the main thing is that you don't tweak the spelling of every single word (that would get too clunky). I think the dialect, like the landscape, can almost become a character in and of itself because of where your story takes place. Without it, your story would not be as multi-dimensional. Great job. I always enjoy reading your chapters because they are so polished. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Tonulak
Hi Barbra,
I enjoyed this chapter and the exploration of the Black part of town. One thing; Have you noticed that white people's dogs bark at black people? The same happens with dogs that belong to black people. I've experienced that the first time I've been with blacks that had dogs the first time I met them. I think the dog in your scene should be wary and growl, it would add more tension. Just a suggestion. Great job--Ted
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Hi Barbra,
I enjoyed this chapter and the exploration of the Black part of town. One thing; Have you noticed that white people's dogs bark at black people? The same happens with dogs that belong to black people. I've experienced that the first time I've been with blacks that had dogs the first time I met them. I think the dog in your scene should be wary and growl, it would add more tension. Just a suggestion. Great job--Ted
Comment Written 15-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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I have not noticed that, but....since I have been an adult I have lived on military posts, my husband is retired active Army, and we all live together, so the dogs grow up in a multicultural environment.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well this has taken a really different turn into a different neighborhood. Well done as always, and looking forward to reading more. Rox
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Well this has taken a really different turn into a different neighborhood. Well done as always, and looking forward to reading more. Rox
Comment Written 15-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbie, a very interesting chapter. We too, have areas here where the white man is careful to tread, so your cautious tension worked well. I like the way Cash approaches problems. Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Hi Barbie, a very interesting chapter. We too, have areas here where the white man is careful to tread, so your cautious tension worked well. I like the way Cash approaches problems. Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 15-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful chapter. I like the down home feel of the piece. The dialogue sounds natural. Teh characters are believable.
Barbara
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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This is a wonderful chapter. I like the down home feel of the piece. The dialogue sounds natural. Teh characters are believable.
Barbara
Comment Written 15-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from fafa
I liked this chapter, I hope to continue reading this story so good, it has been very good writing and has much future, greetings and continues with your text which is very interesting very happy year
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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I liked this chapter, I hope to continue reading this story so good, it has been very good writing and has much future, greetings and continues with your text which is very interesting very happy year
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lynette Marie
Excellent, as always. Your dialogue leaves nothing to criticize, it is well done and believable. The plot is moving along at just the right pace. I can't wait to find out about that treasure!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
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Excellent, as always. Your dialogue leaves nothing to criticize, it is well done and believable. The plot is moving along at just the right pace. I can't wait to find out about that treasure!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. It's pleasure hearing from you.
