Savannah Love
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Comment from adewpearl
That final question sure is the $64,000 question! Why are these guys so convinced there is a treasure that Paige never once heard about when she was growing up? You sure have my interest piqued, and it has to be quite a substantial treasure, too, for this Walker guy to take such chances to obtain it. He seems to be getting more and more desperate and reckless. Brooke
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That final question sure is the $64,000 question! Why are these guys so convinced there is a treasure that Paige never once heard about when she was growing up? You sure have my interest piqued, and it has to be quite a substantial treasure, too, for this Walker guy to take such chances to obtain it. He seems to be getting more and more desperate and reckless. Brooke
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Comment from barkingdog
I bet Morgan could have brought Walker down! I love that pooch.
Well, at least they have an eye witness. Paige. They should take her to the ER.
I wonder, too, what the Walker group knows about there being a treasure.
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I bet Morgan could have brought Walker down! I love that pooch.
Well, at least they have an eye witness. Paige. They should take her to the ER.
I wonder, too, what the Walker group knows about there being a treasure.
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Nice continuation of the story, Cash and Billy Joe arrived timeously. There must be a reason for the treasure story, and the detective is right to pursue it, since that seems to be the root of all Paige's trouble, but will he now arrest Dwayne - or will the Walkers already have their legal eagle on hand to spring him?
A nicely tangled web this story, it does seem to me that Paige or Cash may indeed have the right to the title of this place, and one of them almost certainly holds the key to the 'treasure'.
Patrick
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Hi Barbara,
Nice continuation of the story, Cash and Billy Joe arrived timeously. There must be a reason for the treasure story, and the detective is right to pursue it, since that seems to be the root of all Paige's trouble, but will he now arrest Dwayne - or will the Walkers already have their legal eagle on hand to spring him?
A nicely tangled web this story, it does seem to me that Paige or Cash may indeed have the right to the title of this place, and one of them almost certainly holds the key to the 'treasure'.
Patrick
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from jadapenn
Plenty of action in this chapter as Paige gets into trouble and the guys rush to help. This Walker has been a pest for some time now and the police need to get to the bottom of the matter. I feel your writing flows smoother, Barbie. Well written. I enjoyed. luv jada
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Plenty of action in this chapter as Paige gets into trouble and the guys rush to help. This Walker has been a pest for some time now and the police need to get to the bottom of the matter. I feel your writing flows smoother, Barbie. Well written. I enjoyed. luv jada
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Janie King
The cops best arrest this guy or i would say they are in on the mess going on somehow. At least this weak I'm not waiting to see how bad she's been hurt. Good chapter. I'm not sure if you saw that dejohnsrld (Debbie) has started a multi-poem book for birthday greetings for Miss Evelyn. Her birthday is jan. 12th. She will be 87 years old. She's home but she's weak and not gaining her strength back very fast this time. If you feel inclined maybe you can add a birthday greeting to her, she does love you so. Tom is sending her trophy so she should have it by her birthday, it is so important to her. Her health has me concerned. Thanks for all your prayers. God loves you and I do too.
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The cops best arrest this guy or i would say they are in on the mess going on somehow. At least this weak I'm not waiting to see how bad she's been hurt. Good chapter. I'm not sure if you saw that dejohnsrld (Debbie) has started a multi-poem book for birthday greetings for Miss Evelyn. Her birthday is jan. 12th. She will be 87 years old. She's home but she's weak and not gaining her strength back very fast this time. If you feel inclined maybe you can add a birthday greeting to her, she does love you so. Tom is sending her trophy so she should have it by her birthday, it is so important to her. Her health has me concerned. Thanks for all your prayers. God loves you and I do too.
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A quick moving chapter, Barbara.
Paige hasn't had/ isn't having an easy time of it. No wonder she's afraid. And still the mystery of the treasure isn't solved - can't wait to find out about it.
it's a pity the chap got away
you're comin' (in) this direction
down the hill - hall
Good(,) the police are close.
there's a treasure?(")
Margaret
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A quick moving chapter, Barbara.
Paige hasn't had/ isn't having an easy time of it. No wonder she's afraid. And still the mystery of the treasure isn't solved - can't wait to find out about it.
it's a pity the chap got away
you're comin' (in) this direction
down the hill - hall
Good(,) the police are close.
there's a treasure?(")
Margaret
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from c_lucas
I guess it's time for Morgan to prove his worth and find the treasure. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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I guess it's time for Morgan to prove his worth and find the treasure. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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Thank you for the kind review. Morgan will end up being worth the cost of his dog food.
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Morgan doesn't like being second feedle to a ghost.
Comment from Ben Colder
Yea? Why do they think there is a treasure? That cut throat dude will get his, you just wait and see. Oh I forgot your the author. Just yanking your rope. He. He. Good work sugar. I like it much.
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Yea? Why do they think there is a treasure? That cut throat dude will get his, you just wait and see. Oh I forgot your the author. Just yanking your rope. He. He. Good work sugar. I like it much.
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you. LOL
Comment from Gungalo
Paige always seems to be the one getting hurt. Sigh, now she will have to go to the doctor's again. The culprit got away it seems. Sigh, this is pretty involved eh?
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Paige always seems to be the one getting hurt. Sigh, now she will have to go to the doctor's again. The culprit got away it seems. Sigh, this is pretty involved eh?
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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You are so welcome girlie. I enjoy your story immensely.
