Savannah Love
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Comment from Cumbrianlass
Great post. Poor Paige - no one wants to believe her, or they're just not listening. Everything is circling around this mysterious treasure. I'm dying to know what it is.
I don't like that detective too much - there's something about him that makes me wonder.
You keep the tension going, my friend. Look forward to the next.
Av
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Great post. Poor Paige - no one wants to believe her, or they're just not listening. Everything is circling around this mysterious treasure. I'm dying to know what it is.
I don't like that detective too much - there's something about him that makes me wonder.
You keep the tension going, my friend. Look forward to the next.
Av
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Zue65
This is story is getting exciting twice over and I can't get enough of it. I don't know if I can continue reviewing since my hands are full now with my classes. I do enjoyed every chapter of this story. Well done, God bless.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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This is story is getting exciting twice over and I can't get enough of it. I don't know if I can continue reviewing since my hands are full now with my classes. I do enjoyed every chapter of this story. Well done, God bless.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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I understand. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from chasennov
Savannah Love. 'Chapter Sixteen Part Four.' I'm so sorry that I've missed so much of your work, Barbara, but I find your chapters are even better than before. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Savannah Love. 'Chapter Sixteen Part Four.' I'm so sorry that I've missed so much of your work, Barbara, but I find your chapters are even better than before. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are always welcome.
Comment from Writingfundimension
The Sheriff has now become a suspect to my mind. He's reluctant to arrest and seems far more interested in finding out where the treasure is than getting Paige's statement. I very much enjoyed this chapter, Barbara.
:0) Bev
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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The Sheriff has now become a suspect to my mind. He's reluctant to arrest and seems far more interested in finding out where the treasure is than getting Paige's statement. I very much enjoyed this chapter, Barbara.
:0) Bev
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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I am starting to worry about the sheriff myself. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara :0)
Comment from bookishfabler
Hello there again. I'm glad I found your novel again. I know I missed a bunch. I will try to be better this time. I found nothing to nit pick about, very well done. A page turner
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Hello there again. I'm glad I found your novel again. I know I missed a bunch. I will try to be better this time. I found nothing to nit pick about, very well done. A page turner
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I am so happy you're back.
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Me too
Comment from mysteriousmuse
Hello Barbara, My name is Sheri. What a great story. I love stories that mix the past and present. I am assuming the treasure everyone is looking for was hidden in the house many years before? Maybe not.. either way I like the way it flows. I have not read any but this part of your story but am now looking forward to reading more of the love story of Cash and Paige..
The only thing I saw was the first sentence.
I think you might try rewording "Backdoors as that is plural.
That was all I found, you are a talented writer and will be reading more.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Hello Barbara, My name is Sheri. What a great story. I love stories that mix the past and present. I am assuming the treasure everyone is looking for was hidden in the house many years before? Maybe not.. either way I like the way it flows. I have not read any but this part of your story but am now looking forward to reading more of the love story of Cash and Paige..
The only thing I saw was the first sentence.
I think you might try rewording "Backdoors as that is plural.
That was all I found, you are a talented writer and will be reading more.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. You're right. I need to correct that.
Comment from Sankey
No confusion glad we are back on track again I missed ya.
Good story yet again. You know how much I have enjoyed your writing.
I think there is another chapter so will get right on it.
No SPAGS hope you will check my stuff out as you have time. happy New Year.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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No confusion glad we are back on track again I missed ya.
Good story yet again. You know how much I have enjoyed your writing.
I think there is another chapter so will get right on it.
No SPAGS hope you will check my stuff out as you have time. happy New Year.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you. You brighten my day.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This held my attention from beginning to end. I see the suspense building in Paige not identifying the attacker right away, but she knew who it was. I was only thinking of one fix, with the line:
He tossed her to the ground and ran.
I think it would sound better as
He pushed her to the ground and ran.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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This held my attention from beginning to end. I see the suspense building in Paige not identifying the attacker right away, but she knew who it was. I was only thinking of one fix, with the line:
He tossed her to the ground and ran.
I think it would sound better as
He pushed her to the ground and ran.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I agree, I will change that.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
I loved the action and the coming together of the story. Really nicely written, too. One tiny thing; "the Backdoor's window" is sort of odd, we don't say two-cars garage, so backdoor window should be used. Otherwise, a great write--Ted
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Dear Barbra,
I loved the action and the coming together of the story. Really nicely written, too. One tiny thing; "the Backdoor's window" is sort of odd, we don't say two-cars garage, so backdoor window should be used. Otherwise, a great write--Ted
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I have fixed the backdoor.
Comment from Lynette Marie
This is an excellent installment. You did a good job creating and conveying tension. The mystery of the treasure is exciting. A great read.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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This is an excellent installment. You did a good job creating and conveying tension. The mystery of the treasure is exciting. A great read.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
