Savannah Love
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Comment from elchupakabra
This is an excellent continuation to the hook you left us(your fans) hanging on in the last post. I don't have anything new to say here, your characters and dialogue have excellent depth and are really believable. The narrative moves the story along well, basically, everything is working. Great work, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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This is an excellent continuation to the hook you left us(your fans) hanging on in the last post. I don't have anything new to say here, your characters and dialogue have excellent depth and are really believable. The narrative moves the story along well, basically, everything is working. Great work, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from DionysusDeVille
Wow this is getting intense, leaves you wondering who the guy is and why didnt he just kill her. Hmm and did cash really lose him that easily
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Wow this is getting intense, leaves you wondering who the guy is and why didnt he just kill her. Hmm and did cash really lose him that easily
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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The guy jumped in a car and left. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from L.A.Matthies
It all seems to flow very nicely. The dialog between Cash, Paige and Billy Joe worked very effectively and seemed realistic to the circumstances ...nice work!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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It all seems to flow very nicely. The dialog between Cash, Paige and Billy Joe worked very effectively and seemed realistic to the circumstances ...nice work!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, i've been off the website for four days and it is driving me cuckoo. something is wrong with my computer. windows wont cut on. i'm trying to get hold of my renter and haven't heard back from him. i need my computer back for work stuff, but don't have money to have it fixed. i enjoyed reading this chapter
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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this is very well written, barbara, i've been off the website for four days and it is driving me cuckoo. something is wrong with my computer. windows wont cut on. i'm trying to get hold of my renter and haven't heard back from him. i need my computer back for work stuff, but don't have money to have it fixed. i enjoyed reading this chapter
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Computers can be a real pain. I hope it gets better. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from elgone
The detective is in cahoots of course, looking for the information his partners couldn't get by force. Page will remember something eventually that will clue in to the treasure.
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The detective is in cahoots of course, looking for the information his partners couldn't get by force. Page will remember something eventually that will clue in to the treasure.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from abbasjoy
Wow! This is really getting not just interesting, but mighty dangerous. Now Paige is hurt and who knows what other drama is going to take place, with everyone looking for this treasure, which Paige doesn't know anything about.
I do trust the police will do something about this latest occurrence, because someone is going to get killed sooner or later, if they don't do something to prevent it.
On the edge of my seat eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Wow! This is really getting not just interesting, but mighty dangerous. Now Paige is hurt and who knows what other drama is going to take place, with everyone looking for this treasure, which Paige doesn't know anything about.
I do trust the police will do something about this latest occurrence, because someone is going to get killed sooner or later, if they don't do something to prevent it.
On the edge of my seat eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from AprilShower
Oh, dear! Now we have to wait to find out the answer to that question, Barbara. This is well written. Too bad the fellow didn't get caught by Cash. Cutting Paige was a very mean thing for him to do. I hope this man is caught soon.
April
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Oh, dear! Now we have to wait to find out the answer to that question, Barbara. This is well written. Too bad the fellow didn't get caught by Cash. Cutting Paige was a very mean thing for him to do. I hope this man is caught soon.
April
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from kiwijenny
Well done...the treasure is causing all sorts of problems for Paige....
I like the dialog....it makes it real and anchors the story.
The picture is great. It looks ghostly
God bless
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Well done...the treasure is causing all sorts of problems for Paige....
I like the dialog....it makes it real and anchors the story.
The picture is great. It looks ghostly
God bless
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Glad she recognized the villain. Now we know whodunnit ... :)
The drama continues and you do a great job holding your reader's interest, Barbara.
Another good chapter.
Sonali :)
Good(.) (T)he police are close.
Those cuts need (to be)looked at."
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Glad she recognized the villain. Now we know whodunnit ... :)
The drama continues and you do a great job holding your reader's interest, Barbara.
Another good chapter.
Sonali :)
Good(.) (T)he police are close.
Those cuts need (to be)looked at."
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank your the catches. I appreciate your help.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Oh now Cash wonders where Paige is, incredible - lol.
We'd better rescue her. Ya know how much trouble that dang Yankee can get into." - Told ya so. lol
"He sliced her a few times. I can't tell how deep." - First off I'm officially a serious Billy Joe Booster. That is my boy!
Second off, this story is now getting seriously dangerous for Paige. It seems there's a progression of violence toward her that makes me worry for her safety. Which means you've got serious talent. lol
Those cuts need looked at - slight tweak needed.
I have a better question for Detective Davis - What's your cut of the treasure, since you surely aren't trying to do your day job -ugh. I'm not liking him - again good job.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Oh now Cash wonders where Paige is, incredible - lol.
We'd better rescue her. Ya know how much trouble that dang Yankee can get into." - Told ya so. lol
"He sliced her a few times. I can't tell how deep." - First off I'm officially a serious Billy Joe Booster. That is my boy!
Second off, this story is now getting seriously dangerous for Paige. It seems there's a progression of violence toward her that makes me worry for her safety. Which means you've got serious talent. lol
Those cuts need looked at - slight tweak needed.
I have a better question for Detective Davis - What's your cut of the treasure, since you surely aren't trying to do your day job -ugh. I'm not liking him - again good job.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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LOL, I enjoyed reading your review. I will look at that area.
