Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Makes me wonder how much Johnny law really knows about the elusive treasure. Who knows, when it is discovered, the law will swoop right in and take it.
Hmmmmm?
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015
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Hi,
Makes me wonder how much Johnny law really knows about the elusive treasure. Who knows, when it is discovered, the law will swoop right in and take it.
Hmmmmm?
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015
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Your review made me smile.
Comment from Sasha
Sorry, I've been away recuperating from pneumonia. I am sort of back. I'm going to review the writers that I read on a regular basis and hope I can catch up on what I've missed. this is a terrific chapter filled with lots of tension and ends with a great question. Why do Dwayne Walker, James Davis Junior, and Tyler Davis believe there's a treasure?...I do hope they get the answer before anything else happens to poor Paige.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Sorry, I've been away recuperating from pneumonia. I am sort of back. I'm going to review the writers that I read on a regular basis and hope I can catch up on what I've missed. this is a terrific chapter filled with lots of tension and ends with a great question. Why do Dwayne Walker, James Davis Junior, and Tyler Davis believe there's a treasure?...I do hope they get the answer before anything else happens to poor Paige.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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I truly hope your feeling better. Thank you for catching up.
Comment from emrpoems
You guessed right I do not like reading dialogue but once I got to reading you caught my interest and was able to arrest it throughout the piece. Good development
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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You guessed right I do not like reading dialogue but once I got to reading you caught my interest and was able to arrest it throughout the piece. Good development
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. Most of my reviewers do like dialogue and compliment me on it.
Comment from pbroussard209
I have not read any of this book before, but I found it easy to follow and kind of see what is going on. Your dialogue was very realistic and a the guy with the knife was intense. Great chapter. I hope to catch some more of this book.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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I have not read any of this book before, but I found it easy to follow and kind of see what is going on. Your dialogue was very realistic and a the guy with the knife was intense. Great chapter. I hope to catch some more of this book.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from PoeticXscape
That picture creeps me out. I'm sure that isn't the intention ha ha ha. This had good detail in the storyline and interesting characters.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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That picture creeps me out. I'm sure that isn't the intention ha ha ha. This had good detail in the storyline and interesting characters.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Correct the intention was to show what the old outside kitchens looked like. I have had people who didn't know what they were. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, that Dwayne Walker must be getting pretty desperate, to attack when the others were so close. Well written, as always. I especially liked Paige's explanation to Davis.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Wow, that Dwayne Walker must be getting pretty desperate, to attack when the others were so close. Well written, as always. I especially liked Paige's explanation to Davis.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara, nicely penned action and follow through with your characters.
The treasure seems to be still as elusive to all. No issues my end. Clean and concise read for your plot.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Dear Barbara, nicely penned action and follow through with your characters.
The treasure seems to be still as elusive to all. No issues my end. Clean and concise read for your plot.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. How far North does one need to be to see the Northern Lights?
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I can see them at the cottage which is North East if my main home. Bon Echo's usually come in late August into September.:)
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Comment from amahra
You do a very good job of making this very short portion of a chapter full of action and suspense. I try to keep up. And you make it easy by keeping the chapters short. I loved this chapter; my heart skipped a beat when Paige got stabbed. Only one thing though: shouldn't Paige go to the emergency room instead of making an appointment for a stab wound? Just curious.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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You do a very good job of making this very short portion of a chapter full of action and suspense. I try to keep up. And you make it easy by keeping the chapters short. I loved this chapter; my heart skipped a beat when Paige got stabbed. Only one thing though: shouldn't Paige go to the emergency room instead of making an appointment for a stab wound? Just curious.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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The wounds weren't that serious. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from allborn66
I like the action in this chapter. Evidence vs. intuition is always a good conflict. The dialogue is smooth. It has been a while since I read a chapter, but I think Paige might be a little more in shock, or something, after being attacked. If nothing else her adrenalin would be flowing.
Barbara
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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I like the action in this chapter. Evidence vs. intuition is always a good conflict. The dialogue is smooth. It has been a while since I read a chapter, but I think Paige might be a little more in shock, or something, after being attacked. If nothing else her adrenalin would be flowing.
Barbara
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Paige is on adrenalin right now. In a few hours she'll fall apart. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JM daSilva
, and grabbed a knife from the sheath inside his boot. (great place for a knife)
The police came in time this time.
"You need medical attention." Cash ran his fingers through his hair, and (remove then) let
Yeah, she should try to discover why they think there's a treasure. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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, and grabbed a knife from the sheath inside his boot. (great place for a knife)
The police came in time this time.
"You need medical attention." Cash ran his fingers through his hair, and (remove then) let
Yeah, she should try to discover why they think there's a treasure. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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I never used to put the then there but my editor made me go through my last novel and add all the then. Thank you for the kind review.
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Ok, then. I don't. I guess it's a matter of style in this case.
