Savannah Love
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Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Just when Paige is finally able to get back in her home, it appears someone, other than a ghost, still poses a danger.
As usual, excellent dialog and Chief Dennison's obvious prejudice toward Nala, couldn't be better shown. Paige seems to have two social wall standing between her and the deep South; racial prejudice and social customs. I almost forgot, add family disputes from past generations.
I will be waiting to find out who is attacking her. More love and Irish Hugs to help you hurry to the end of the mystery.
Roger
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Hi Barbara:)
Just when Paige is finally able to get back in her home, it appears someone, other than a ghost, still poses a danger.
As usual, excellent dialog and Chief Dennison's obvious prejudice toward Nala, couldn't be better shown. Paige seems to have two social wall standing between her and the deep South; racial prejudice and social customs. I almost forgot, add family disputes from past generations.
I will be waiting to find out who is attacking her. More love and Irish Hugs to help you hurry to the end of the mystery.
Roger
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. I hope you had a nice Christmas and are looking forward to the new year.
"I'm full(,) really." Nala laughed.
Cash pulled in (pulled in at an) Oriental Buffet and parked. "Let's eat."
"I happen to be fond of oriental (Oriental) food.
Billy Joe's eye brows (eyebrows) clumped closer together.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara. I hope you had a nice Christmas and are looking forward to the new year.
"I'm full(,) really." Nala laughed.
Cash pulled in (pulled in at an) Oriental Buffet and parked. "Let's eat."
"I happen to be fond of oriental (Oriental) food.
Billy Joe's eye brows (eyebrows) clumped closer together.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and wonderful eye. I absolutely hate commas and am no good at with them.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A great chapter with yet more mystery wondering if the police are in on this too. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Paige was struck with. Have a happy New Year~~Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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A great chapter with yet more mystery wondering if the police are in on this too. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Paige was struck with. Have a happy New Year~~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Gungalo
Poor Paige, she can't seem to find any peace can she? Now there's someone else after her Sigh, it seems she is now under the auspices of a ghost.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Poor Paige, she can't seem to find any peace can she? Now there's someone else after her Sigh, it seems she is now under the auspices of a ghost.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Paige is having another rough go, but I think it will be solved very soon. At least I hope it will.
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Me tooooooo girl.
Comment from Sasha
Oh my, what is happening? This does not sound good. Please don't keep me on pins and needles and post again soon, I just have to know what is going on. Absolutely great chapter. Enjoyed it very much. Love Billy Joe's toothpick addiction. Very funny.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Oh my, what is happening? This does not sound good. Please don't keep me on pins and needles and post again soon, I just have to know what is going on. Absolutely great chapter. Enjoyed it very much. Love Billy Joe's toothpick addiction. Very funny.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Billy Joe is trying to quit smoking, much earlier post, he's using toothpicks for that problem. I would actually like to post in mid-week, but my third son and his fiancé are here, so I am not sure.
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I know, but his obsession with toothpicks is really quite obsessive and very funny too.
Comment from judiverse
This is wonderful. It really seems that they aren't getting to the bottom of what's been going on with Paige's house. As they say, it's like they're being spoon fed information. Somebody's being protected. The Oriental Buffet scene is fun. Billy Joe's reaction to the buffet is right in character. You really end with great suspense. What is happening with Paige? Hope someone hears her and comes to the rescue. judi
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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This is wonderful. It really seems that they aren't getting to the bottom of what's been going on with Paige's house. As they say, it's like they're being spoon fed information. Somebody's being protected. The Oriental Buffet scene is fun. Billy Joe's reaction to the buffet is right in character. You really end with great suspense. What is happening with Paige? Hope someone hears her and comes to the rescue. judi
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and you are right. Things are moving slowly.
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You're so welcome. With someone grabbing Paige, that should move the investigation along. judi
Comment from c_lucas
Paige is holding true to her reputation of getting into trouble/ This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Paige is holding true to her reputation of getting into trouble/ This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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I think Cash may mention that too.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
As soon as the police are finished with my house, - add comma
we're not only bein' spoon feed - fed
Cash, stop at the closest - add comma for direct address
and would please point out the toothpicks - would you please
As the fived left the restaurant - five
Look, they're packing up - add the comma
Good dialogue and very telling character development throughout such as when the chief wipes his hand after shaking Nala's hand
That is one cliffhanger of a closing
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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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As soon as the police are finished with my house, - add comma
we're not only bein' spoon feed - fed
Cash, stop at the closest - add comma for direct address
and would please point out the toothpicks - would you please
As the fived left the restaurant - five
Look, they're packing up - add the comma
Good dialogue and very telling character development throughout such as when the chief wipes his hand after shaking Nala's hand
That is one cliffhanger of a closing
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2013
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Thank you for catching those. A couple of things I just spaced out. I've had the flue and I guess my brain isn't connected yet. THANK YOU
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Yes, I could tell from a couple of the mistakes that they were of the "I am not up to snuff" type as opposed to actual errors :-)
