Savannah Love
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
I LOVE READING DIALOGUES,SPECIALLY THIS ONE, SO WELL WRITTEN, SO FUN AND ENJOYABLE. THE ARTWORK IS JUST PERFECT FOR THE SPECIAL OCASSION!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER BARBARA! HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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I LOVE READING DIALOGUES,SPECIALLY THIS ONE, SO WELL WRITTEN, SO FUN AND ENJOYABLE. THE ARTWORK IS JUST PERFECT FOR THE SPECIAL OCASSION!
WONDERFUL CHAPTER BARBARA! HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR!
:)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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I appreciate the kind review and you dropping by.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
We like dialogue so all is well. The prejudice is still real today unfortunately. This is a good chapter. happy New year. God loves you and so do we.
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We like dialogue so all is well. The prejudice is still real today unfortunately. This is a good chapter. happy New year. God loves you and so do we.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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I appreciate the kind review. I hope you are doing better.
Comment from Writingfundimension
A great chapter, barbara. You very nicely weave humor with the darker sides of predjudice. And the ending is fab -- I hope Cash has time to come to the rescue! Warmest regards, Bev
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A great chapter, barbara. You very nicely weave humor with the darker sides of predjudice. And the ending is fab -- I hope Cash has time to come to the rescue! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2013
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I appreciate the kind review and you dropping by.
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My pleasure, barbara. :0) Bev
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Wow - what a cliffhanger! Thanks a lot, Barbara! LOL. Good post, good flow, and fun dialogue.
But who the heck is in her back yard?
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General Tso's Chicken." - Check this - I think it should be General Tao's Chicken.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Wow - what a cliffhanger! Thanks a lot, Barbara! LOL. Good post, good flow, and fun dialogue.
But who the heck is in her back yard?
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General Tso's Chicken." - Check this - I think it should be General Tao's Chicken.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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According to the Oriental Restaurants in this area it's Tso's Oh dear. Thank you for the kind review.
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Yes, apologies! My bad, Barbara!
Comment from joneau2
Hmm, your story remain interesting and entertaining. I can see why you have found it necessary to mention that the chapter has been divided to accommodate FS, and that the sections are not meant to stand alone. I have the same problem.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Hmm, your story remain interesting and entertaining. I can see why you have found it necessary to mention that the chapter has been divided to accommodate FS, and that the sections are not meant to stand alone. I have the same problem.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting chapter. I like how your characters interact with each other. The dialogue sounds natural. The conflict is intriguing.
Barbara
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This is a very interesting chapter. I like how your characters interact with each other. The dialogue sounds natural. The conflict is intriguing.
Barbara
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Wow, nice cliff-hanger ending there - and with the cops out the front and in the house? Someone really is desperate.
Presumably getting close now to the whole house of cards falling apart for someone.
While I remember, hope you have a fabulous new year, and I believe you have a birthday coming up on the 3rd. Hope its a great one.
Patrick
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Hi Barbara,
Wow, nice cliff-hanger ending there - and with the cops out the front and in the house? Someone really is desperate.
Presumably getting close now to the whole house of cards falling apart for someone.
While I remember, hope you have a fabulous new year, and I believe you have a birthday coming up on the 3rd. Hope its a great one.
Patrick
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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You are so sweet. Yes, this birthday I will be the big 60, but my heart still feels like a teenager. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Barbara,
The interaction between your characters
always flows naturally - and I thoroughly
enjoyed the scene at the restaurant....
left me feeling hungry - I'm off to finish
the evening meal.
Margaret
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Barbara,
The interaction between your characters
always flows naturally - and I thoroughly
enjoyed the scene at the restaurant....
left me feeling hungry - I'm off to finish
the evening meal.
Margaret
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from ChristineRCJR
Savannah Love
CHAPTER SIXTEEN, PART THREE by Barbara.wilkey was a lovely chapter to read. I found the interaction between the characters was well-rounded and the atmosphere fit perfectly for what the author intended. I particularly enjoyed the banter between the characters.
The author makes a point in conveying to readers that this is not a stand alone chapter. I appreciated knowing, even knowing this I was not confused or put off during the reading of this chapter.
Very nicely done.
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Savannah Love
CHAPTER SIXTEEN, PART THREE by Barbara.wilkey was a lovely chapter to read. I found the interaction between the characters was well-rounded and the atmosphere fit perfectly for what the author intended. I particularly enjoyed the banter between the characters.
The author makes a point in conveying to readers that this is not a stand alone chapter. I appreciated knowing, even knowing this I was not confused or put off during the reading of this chapter.
Very nicely done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Dawn Munro
OH! You are cruel, Barbara Wilkey! This is such a FABULOUS cliff hanger! Yer killin' me! LOL!
What a great chapter! And I'm already out of sixes; have been since yesterday! Wonderful writing, my friend! (Do we HAVE to wait a whole week for the next part?!!! *whimper*)
OUTSTANDING conclusion! **************** (and I loved the whole thing about the restaurant too. You've made me hungry! LOL)
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OH! You are cruel, Barbara Wilkey! This is such a FABULOUS cliff hanger! Yer killin' me! LOL!
What a great chapter! And I'm already out of sixes; have been since yesterday! Wonderful writing, my friend! (Do we HAVE to wait a whole week for the next part?!!! *whimper*)
OUTSTANDING conclusion! **************** (and I loved the whole thing about the restaurant too. You've made me hungry! LOL)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2013
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I am going to try to post during the week, but my son and his fiancé are here and I am not sure how much time I will have. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh good! I am so selfishly glad - selfish because we don't get our sixes replenished before Saturday at midnight. But I can't wait to read on!!! *smile*
